|Reviews for Torn vs Keira|
| DarkEcoFreak chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
Lol! I don't like yaoi, but I do like this!
| Darath chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
I really, really enjoyed this story. I'm a huge fan of the Jak and Daxter universe...
| M chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
that was one of the best jaktorn fic iv ever read
it would be awsome if u add on a bit for wen kiera and the others found out XP
| seventhSINwrath chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
And I DID love it,it was so cute Torn fighting for his Jak.
| SuranasuGirl chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
I LOVE YOU AND I LOVE THIS STORY! You are one of my fav authors. I have a little challeng for ya! I bet you can't write a JakxTorn fic rated M, and make torn the uke _! Plz at least try . LOVE YOU
| Hyper Kid chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
Very nice. I don't know how to play poker.
| Ginkyofu13 chapter 1 . 5/1/2006
Man that is so wrong! Keira lost to torn! Ashelin is raged! What is next Ashelin killing Torn and Keira and kissed Jak secretly...
Ashelin - Strange!
| PrisonBreakFreak chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
Absolutely LURVED it! It made me laugh so much! "Little Pinky Warrior", why doesn't it sound as feroucious as "Orange Lightning"? .
| M-Angel 05 chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
NO, you have to do a love scene with Torn and Jak...PLEASE!
I couldn't help it...I really liked your story..._
| LoorTheDarkElf chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
Nafiea: OMFG! You are evil, you know that? Lorana is laughing so hard I have to type for her.
Lorana: -Rolling on the floor laughing her ass off.-
Nafiea: Her mother thinks she's been possesed by a hiena... 0,o
| Bobolac chapter 1 . 10/17/2005
Yay for more Torn/Jak. Wonderful job. I love how Brutter sounds just like Grover in my head...very funny stuff. Keep it up!
| ladybadasskillington chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
That was hilarious! It made me giggle. Jak and Torn make a great couple.
| animedragongirl chapter 1 . 8/29/2005
This... hahahahaha... was so... hahahahahahahahaha... hilarious! BUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! OMG, I don't think I've laughed so hard in ages!
| Aimed mischief chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
Ha ha...! This was s funny, I loved it! I laughed truh the whole story, it was incredible! Keep up the excellent work and have fun! I really hope you'll make many stories like this, coz this one rocks!
| Moewen chapter 1 . 4/29/2005
I wish I too lived in the palace, you aabulana and LightEcoSage makes the life in there sound funny...smiles