Reviews for Heart Of Dragon Gold: Prince Of Tennis
AbsurdlySassy chapter 24 . 3/21/2015
I am fully enjoying this fantastic story. I normally chose to saved reviews for the end but the fighting scene between ryoma and tesuka has sparked my interest. By no means do I intend this comment as a flame, for as you have so blanteny put it " flames belong in dragons mouths". The one small out of place detail that has pushed me to reveiw so prematurely Is engaging in aerial combat, To drop below your opponent and give them the advantage of a superior altitude is pure folly. He's in being, that this gives them the opportunity to strike at the junction between the crown of the head and the neck (where we humans have our temples) And because dragons like humans have major blood vessels and arteries where the temples are,to have this area on either side answered by the jaws of attacking Dragon, as is likely to happen when an opponent has an advantage of do serious damage to dragons spine and blood hello potentially rendering the Dragon unconscious and therefore enable to fight back, and therefore they have already lost the battle. I feel the urgent need to remind you that this is not intended as a flame and that you areA talented writer and I am quite enjoying your work so far. While I am on the combat of dragons at flight I wish to inquire whether or not you would agree with me that to make means in which multiple dragons are at flights or even just one more realistic, to write in the sound dragons make as they flypersonally I do not believe a dragon in flight is soundless on the contrary I rather think it is quite when writing seen some dragons and flight it would aid you're writing to include the sound. For I once heard A group of flying dragons referred to as a thunder, because of the great didn't that can be heard all over the land as a flyby.I hope my rather lengthy comment will be taken with a grain of salt as this is 1 o'clock in the morning and I don't my mind is at its best. One last time I feel the need to remind you that this comment is not a flake but is rather quite the opposite and I hope my 1 o'clock review may help you further your writing as I avidly hope you shall keep writing.
Sincerely Layla.
Post script.
I am using my phone to write this review so please forgive any spelling mistakes and grammatical errors I may be making well writing this as I have not the heart to go back over it and risk deleting it all because that would suck big time. And also please note that I'm using the microphone function and said iPhone and therefore are doubly prone to beginners mistakes with with my grammar.
Colt401 chapter 143 . 8/30/2013
A couple of spelling mistakes once in a while, a few grammatical errors but overall one of the best fics i've ever read! excellent work!:)
x.symphony chapter 119 . 1/22/2012
OMG I FEEL SO SO SO SO SORRY FOR YUKI :( He is my favourite character in this fanfic, and I have to thank you for making him this way. Because of my love for him, I find it hard to support tezuxfuji now... Grrr :( Don't be sad Yuki O You're awesome for making an OOC that I like better than the PoT characters 3 YUKIIIIIIIIII Ö
x.symphony chapter 81 . 1/15/2012
Haha love how you incorporated Yakitate! Japan into this *winks* I'm an ardent fan of it 3 I read till this chapter in about two days, and I must say, you are an AWESOME writer. I never, ever thought of portraying the characters of PoT as mythical creatures (or if it ever crossed my mind, I was too lazy to do it), but you managed it! This is one of the longest fics I've ever read (or am going to read, since I technically haven't gotten to the end yet) but it has become one of my favourite PoT fics (: TezuxFuji rawks xD
Eru no Tsubasa chapter 54 . 8/30/2011
I think I've fallen in love with Yuki... For some reason I picture Yue from Cardcaptor Sakura... you know, wings, angelic appearance, guardians, mostly silent and calm but fiercely loyal to those they protect... *starry eyes*
Eru no Tsubasa chapter 49 . 8/27/2011
Yasashiku has my love! *swoon* It's not often that I fall in love with OCs, but he is so gentle and calm... and a older version of Yukimura... not to mention my soft spot for all bluenettes... Kya! Let him be alright! XD
Eru no Tsubasa chapter 46 . 8/27/2011
"Yet, such a thing was hard to do when the red head suddenly took to gawking at his neck as though it had started screening R rated movies." LMAO I pictured this in my mind and fell over laughing... XD
Eru no Tsubasa chapter 44 . 8/27/2011
"Beloved Blood." Saa... My guess was very wrong, it appears... -bonks self on head- Anyways, loved the angst... XD
Eru no Tsubasa chapter 43 . 8/27/2011
Hmm... Pamujat pmuut? B...b... bond mate? LOL it's the only thing I can think of... I'm probably so far off, but oh well -off to see just how wrong I am - by the way love the TezukaFuji smut! I'm all in for Atobe as Hikari ruler... I used to detest him in the anime but he grew on me XD and now he's one of my favourites. Love the style of your writing, I can totally imagine you publishing your works. XD -okay, reads on.-
Eru no Tsubasa chapter 33 . 8/26/2011
Yes! I'm finally following the pace of this story! At the beginning, I was so hopelessly confused... it wasn't that your story was unclear, more like I had to adjust to an overload of information dumped into my poor, overworked brain... XD But I couldn't give up cause I HAD to read TezukaFuji... it's like my life, and I've read most of the other Perfect Pair stories already. And now I understand! -smiles- Great story, very interesting and I love all the twists! Okay I'm gonna go read the next chappy now...
Eru no Tsubasa chapter 4 . 7/24/2011
Wow, this is... interesting. Certainly different, but in a good way. :)
yukitenshixxx chapter 34 . 6/6/2011
nooooo, not again. I need to go to sleep. :p

I totaly love your story and if I could I would just read it until the end and read it again.

But I need to go to sleep and my exams start tomorrow so I won't be able to read as much as normal. But I really want to read further. I am so caught up in the story.

you write beautifully. can't wait until tommorow evening after all the studying so I can read a bit further.
Kimmytrainer chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
this is confusing... you have a great writing style, though. me and my half asleep brain just find it difficult to decipher, kind of. whatever. i think i'll keep reading now.
xSakuraBlossom chapter 144 . 7/15/2010
Oh my god, this was an amazing journey! You took a well-beloved epic and, if possible, improved it. Like you, I will miss these mythics... At least until I start reading the sequel

By the way, I also enjoyed the many guest appearances from other animes and mangas, it was truly enjoyable xD

You characterized everyone quite well, and I loved your descriptions. You are an amazing writer, and I can't wait to read more from you.

Great job, keep writing~
pentalion chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
:)
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