Reviews for Hallucinations
Athalanta chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
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:)
Greensleeves the Great chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
Wow. I really like the realization that Fingon needs only the idea of Maedhros to support him, and that seems to be true in real life as well- how many of us have actually met our idols?

One quibble- I don't think the word 'hi' (used in the beginning) exists in Middle-earth.

Amazing, but I liked your Ambarussa story better: it was a little easier to read.

Cheers,

Greensleeves
Depprium chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
This is incredible. Some of the paragraphs are very long and tend to ramble, but it works well as a device to see into Fingon's deranged mind. Your descriptions are powerful- I especially like the phrase "alive, disgustingly alive" and how incredibly ugly the word 'stump' is to Fingon.
Naz chapter 1 . 12/22/2004
wow.

It was creepy, confusing, but really, really well-written. But, still...

wow.
Eriala chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
I liked this so much I don't know what to say. Your writing style was really nice, the way it all sort of flows on and on but still seemed very vivid and powerful. Sory of twisted and scary, but definately in a good way.

This is the best fanfic I've read in a long time. Good stuff.

And I agree with Fingon, 'stump' is my least favorite word.