Reviews for Max's Return
BlueMoonRain chapter 1 . 6/13/2001
Very cute. I particulary like what Max said about Zack-that flippant, oh I threw him in the ocean. That was funny.
EyEzOnLY143 chapter 1 . 3/21/2001
omg that was so cute!...the only thing i didnt like was that her friends were dead...now how are kendra and original cindy goin to be her brides maids if there dead..huh..hehe..cute *smiling*..keep writing!
Aquarius Angel chapter 1 . 2/23/2001
I loved it! It was great!
a reader chapter 1 . 2/18/2001
I liked the story, but for heaven's sake, use a dictionary and watch your grammar.
limona chapter 1 . 2/18/2001
The spelling *was* horable, but hey, there are worse faux paux. I had no trouble following this at all. In fact, you cracked me up and I enjoyed reading your piece immensely. I spit rootbeer on my keyboard when you said Max threw Zack into the Atlantic Ocean. You kept a face pace, and I was never bored. I'll look forward to seeing more of your work. Thank you for sharing.
Sonar chapter 1 . 2/18/2001
You forgot Normal and what happened to Bling?
a reader chapter 1 . 2/18/2001
really good, just use spell check and put in paragraphs, and you'll be fine :)