Reviews for Victim
phantom and potter Obsession chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
hm... Joren seems slightly ooc... but this was pretty well written, and that's ok since this is au.
etselec chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
I'm curious: what level class is this (middle school, high school, college)? You have good ideas, but your writing style is a little choppy. Try to focus on varying your word choice, and "show, don't tell" what happens. You have promise!
DestinyHunter chapter 1 . 11/3/2004
AW HOW SAD AND JOREN IS SO INOCENT AND SENSITIVE!
PsychoLioness chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
Very powerful! I can't believe you only got a B on it! That's criminal!
Darking Queen chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
hey! You're back! with a different name, but still back. or mabey i just wasnt paying enough attention. this explains a lot. are you going to continue? I cant wait.
Imperfectionist D chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
O I'm lovin this story please write more! I'm amazed by the flow of words, and the intensity. Update soon!
oceanspike chapter 1 . 11/1/2004
aw...i reconigze it (cannot spell to save my life) newaz, i'm really happy that ur writing! *throws a party*
Lady of Masbolle chapter 1 . 11/1/2004
brilliant chappie darling!