|Reviews for Always There|
| Carissa chapter 17 . 12/10/2004
I love this chapter so much. What a cliffhanger! I can't wait to read the next. Keep em comin.
| Stangchica2003 chapter 16 . 12/8/2004
This was really good. Is she pregnant? Whats going to happen if she is? what will everyone say? Will leon kill jesse? Why is she doing the things she is with Brian when that is totally against what she was about before the team came? Brian needs to wake up and make sure he has his prioritys straight. whats going to happen next? Where are you going with this? keep going and write mroe soon.
| crystalgem1 chapter 16 . 12/8/2004
great new chapter. glad that letty has what seems to be a happy life. you're right, that isn't done very often in these stories. Oh, by the way, I like the title that Mickael MM suggested: Hard Love. That would be a great title for this piece.
Anyway, whatever you choose will be great. keep up the good work. Haley
| Ringles chapter 16 . 12/8/2004
HEY! Sorry I'm not much help with names! I suck at them, hence the reason all of my stories have god awful names...
LOVED THIS CHAP! Wow, so Jade's up the duff (how my brother elequently put it when he and his gf were having a bub lol) so how's everyone going to react to this, what are Jade and Jesse going to go through, I wonder if their relationship will be strong enough to withstand it.
Hey, I was about to say something and I can't think of it... ah reviews, yesh that was it. 48 and only 16 chaps is a big acheivement! I've got a story that's 29 chaps and only has 59, so it's a big thing to me as well, don't worry you're not the only one! So anyways, that advent calendar FW ya sent was quite funny, kept me in a mini fit for about 5 minutes! Ok so this is basically a mini letter rather than review, but in the end, great chap and as always can't wait for more! Take care, peace out...
| XxRocQstaRxX chapter 16 . 12/7/2004
Wow, that was unexpected! update this soon, cause i'm waiting for more!
| Mickael MM chapter 15 . 12/6/2004
I really love this story, how could there be so much heartache in one house.
Brian and Cj should be together, but that's just my opinion
new title: -Home is where the heart breaks
-The Pain of Love
I don't know if they're any good, I'm not sober right now so these suggestions for a new title could be awful
They sound good when I'm in this mental state though
| OTHlover04 chapter 15 . 12/6/2004
this is a good story! update soon!
| Stangchica2003 chapter 15 . 12/6/2004
This was good. So Vince and CJ had a heart to heart. and then Dom and CJ are making up. is it just sex or are they going to look at a realation ship together? will she tell him about the baby? how will he react? keep going and write mroe soon.
| cheerthis95 chapter 8 . 12/6/2004
I cant wiat til Brian gets back and all hell breaks loose, lol .gotta keep it shorit, love a cheer
| cheerthis95 chapter 7 . 12/6/2004
YAy, Jess and JAde, they are perfect for each other, lol. I loved how Roman was! That was totoaly hiarious, totally Roman, lol. i love Roan too, hehe. Oh, the other comment i was going to make in last chapter was that you really do have Cj down in the fact tht she had given up so much and it was wearing on her, lol. i became a mom at 18 and gave it all up too, lol. you really are good at describing reall wear on her and emotions. catch ya later,love cheer
| cheerthis95 chapter 6 . 12/6/2004
hmm, interesting how it all is so intircate,lol. im still in shock. I think Cj and mia and brian and dom are all confused, lol. Im glad shes not giving Dom another chance and agian, you were original in haveing Cj with him BEFORE Letty, not being some skankhe cheated on her with. I like that fact a lot, that Letty busting him for cheating is pretty played out and i gotta say you are doing a great job at bringn something original and different to the ffnet site so as in last reveiw, props to you! Catch ya later, love cheer
| cheerthis95 chapter 5 . 12/6/2004
Damn, they are all twisted and intertwined, the team, cj and her sis, and Brian and Rome! holy shit. thats funny. i bout died laughing imaginng it all, lol. pretty clever there, missy. i think that was a creative way to link them all and i give you mad props for being original. i am loving this story! later cheer
| cheerthis95 chapter 4 . 12/6/2004
Hey! Loved this chapter, im a drama freak, lol. I think Cj would more than likley blame herself, you are spot on. I wouldnt be shockedif brian went after him too, he can loose his cool at times too when pressed, lol. I liked the monoply part, it was cute and they are cute. (Cj and Brian, lol) and I really agree with you, brian is hoter than hell, his eyes are just awesome, lol. Later, love cheer
| cheerthis95 chapter 3 . 12/6/2004
Hey stace! Finally got here a bit late,lol. i did review on chapters 1 and 2, so im picking up where i left off. i think its a good chapter. the only advice i have is that you might want to make sure if you skip like the 6 monthes, maybe put a header or slip it inot your first sentence of the new section. No big, i am just trying to help, lol. i got the same suggestion when i first started and i bet by your latest chapters you are already doing that or have it how you want it. i noticed when i first started writing, i had somany mistakes in Ultimate betrayal then i noticed once i got into later chapters, i wasn't so jumpy in my scenes and all the stuff i had hapening. hehe, i confused a few people, lol. at least i could see your time frame , unlike me, lol. anyways, i can so see Rome saying that and i thought that was a good add. now that i have rambled, im onto the nextchapter! later, love cheer
| Trina3 chapter 15 . 12/5/2004
hey great story! you have done a wondeful job so far. please update soon.