Reviews for Always There
Me-paulsgirlygirlgal chapter 10 . 11/15/2004
Um... UPDATE NOW.

Or else.

LOL just kidding.. i love it! im so hooked its tragic. Please update soon..

Ohh and don't like... fix things straight away okay.. I dont want the story to be short.. i want all this tension and drama... to keep going and going!

YAY!
ranger webb chapter 9 . 11/15/2004
Hey chica.

This was a very nice update. whats going to happen when he meets with the team? is he going to live? will dom kill him? is he going to comfront CJ about what roman told him? is he going to comfront Dom with what he knows about CJ and Dom? where are you going to go with this? whats going to happen next? keep going and wirte more soon..
Ringles chapter 9 . 11/15/2004
Loved it!

Oh please please PLEASE I BEG YOU! DON'T PUT BRIAN WITH MIA! HE BELONGS WITH CJ! PLEASE!

*drops to ground and hangs onto your leg begging you*

Anyway, loved the chapter, and can't wait for more! Peace out...

RiNgLeS
me chapter 8 . 11/13/2004
yay i love this!

please update as soon as possible! I can't wait - but I don't want to spoil it by demanding to know - i just want a new chapter!

You have some cool ideas.. and some really good descriptions!

I liked it when CJ found out about jesse and jade... what CJ was thinking was cool.
RiNgLeS chapter 8 . 11/11/2004
Hey, AH NO DON'T PUT BRIAN AND MIA TOGETHER PLEASE! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! I couldn't take it! I love Brian and CJ together! But damn, big surprise with Rome and CJ! I hope to see more soon, and I can relate in great length to the writers block thing, I've had it for 4 months now. I miss writing my longest story, and my other ones that were taking off. But it's near impossible!

So I do hope that nothing severe hits you like it has me, because I love this story and can't wait for more! Peace out...

RiNgLeS
ranger webb chapter 8 . 11/10/2004
These were nice nice adds. whats going to happen next? will the team take brian in? the engagement i think is with jesse and jade. will rome and cj get together together? will she go back to dom? keep going and writ emore soon.
meee chapter 5 . 11/9/2004
Hey this story is cool - i just reviewed chapter 6 before umm.. i dont reckon the team shoudl get back together with brian.. at least not for a while.. you have to keep the drama going... dont let everythign work out just yet - you gotta string us along for a whiel.. cos you got so many things that are just such potential disasters like the brianna thing.. and Dom..etc

Maybe Mia and Brian shouldn't meet up just yet..

or mabye run into each other by accident

and then they can get really angry at cj for not telling or something.

Hope to see omre writing soon.!
PaulsGirly chapter 6 . 11/9/2004
ACK ACK quick UPDATE QUICK QUICK NOW! i'm hooked man...

oh no its so dramatic.. argh... love it girl! keep going. :D

Oh just by the way - L.A is in California... cali is the state.. and Los Angeles is in Sth Cali.

cools.
Ringles chapter 6 . 11/9/2004
Hey, I have to say, I think I'm falling in love more and more with this story each and every time you post...

Wow, can't wait to see what's going to go down with Mia, Brian and Brianna, but I just can't wait even more for when Mia finds out about Brian and Cj, oh man I hope they get back together, but am loving the whole Dom thing too!

Great work, and CANNOT wait until next time...

RiNgLeS
ranger webb chapter 6 . 11/8/2004
This was a very very nice add. so the team is there and brian doesnt know he has a kid. will mia be able to talk with him? will cj beable to get mia out alone and let her and brain talk? will her and brian get back together? will brian and the team make up? whats going to happen next? where ar eyou going with this? keep going and write mroe soon.
Ringles chapter 5 . 11/6/2004
Hey, you have set yourself up for such a story now! It's really picked up pace and there's so many levels of drama waiting to unfold! Great work and can't wait to see more! Peace out...

RiNgLeS
Ringles chapter 4 . 11/5/2004
Hey, extremely loving this story, also where it's going. So what connections does CJ have with DT? Can't wait to see how that comes out. Brian said the words ay, lol they got disturbed before we could find out if she felt the same! ;) Anyways, can't wait to see even more! Peace out...

RiNgLeS
roswell lover 11 chapter 3 . 11/4/2004
hi

i love your fic

please post more soon
ranger webb chapter 3 . 11/3/2004
This was a nice chapter. so brian and everyone covered for her. that was nice. I get a bad feeling about this date. is something going to happen? whats going to happen next? where are you going with this? keep going and write more soon.
Kate chapter 2 . 11/3/2004
Love the story, 2 chapters and im hooked already! Are you going to focus on CJ or Jade or both? post asap I cant wait to read more! K

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