|Reviews for Realizing Truths|
| Nicole F chapter 7 . 5/27/2013
Loving the commentary. But I simply had to friggin comment on the, "this one time at band camp," thing. I'm a sax player, so I squeed...
| cressey chapter 12 . 1/25/2013
I forgot how much I liked this fic.
| Ml33tninja chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
| RainBlueWater chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
This story is really good so you get a 10 out of 10
| Phoebe097 chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
This is one of the best KiGo fics out there, and my personal fav :) glad i found it here on ffnet!
| amyannonymous chapter 2 . 8/13/2011
awesome story really liking it so far 3
rin : i always sing that when some one says dance in my head... do a little dance, make a little love, get down tonight, oh yeah XD sometimes i sing it out loud though and get weird looks -_-' oh well..deep breath: do a little dance,...
| innermoka101 chapter 10 . 2/20/2011
OMG I LUV UR CONVOs AT THE END U CHICKS R SO FUNNY! LOL : CIRCLES! ANYWAYS YALL SHUD HAV A TALK SHOW ON comedy central SO DAMN FUNNY!\! ID WATCH
| leighann101 chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
I've always wondered where Wade goes to the bathroom as well. Secret flip out of the wall toilet or something? O_o
| We love us chapter 12 . 10/26/2010
how vunderful. almost reminds be of my fav couple from Harry Potter, Fleur and Hermione.
| Madhatterak chapter 12 . 10/1/2010
| Dr. F. M. Obsesser chapter 12 . 6/7/2009
Extremely amusing. For future notice - though you did seem to address this in the later chapters - while your side notes at the bottom are entertaining, a page break or "The end of Chpater_ " would create a clear distinction between the story and the added notes, making them much easier to read. Overall, well done.
| Kay8abc chapter 12 . 5/13/2009
I love the story, and the randomness before and after each chapter. Now to see any other stories you have.
| Satisha chapter 3 . 8/7/2008
OMG! *spaz* how could they steal pocky! *sobs uncontrollably*
| noman chapter 3 . 6/19/2008
I rather like the Rin/Rysha dialogues. However the story itself has some . . . bumpy spots. I suggest visiting
as your one stop shopping for writing help. As an example of one of the 'bumps' I found:
"She also saw a 747 jet coming. It landed on the road, slowing to a halt. Before Ron could say anything to her, they hopped onboard and took off. . . The ride only took two hours and soon they were landing."
1) 747 is (roughly) 230 feet long and 195 feet wide (about football field) not going to fit into the neighborhood
2)747 can't land with a full fuel load so they're going to have to land and refuel before heading to Japan.
3)Depending on takeoff weight, weather, air density, etc you're going to want at least 60 feet of runway for takeoff (and hope you don't have an engine out and end up in Bueno Nacho
4) 747 cruise is Mach .85 which gives about 10 hrs LA to Tokyo.
Why do I bring this up? Because these are unnecessary problems. There doesn't seem to be any need for a 747 in the story so why use it? Remember the "Middelton Space Center"? An SR71 'might' do the trip in three hours (depends on where you decide Middelton is) or use an imaginary 'space plane' that either cruises at better than Mach 3 or can make a sub orbital hop.
With animation, having a 747 land outside your house might be funny. But in prose . . . meh . . . not so much. It 'could' be used for humor (I recall a story that had KP picked up by little grey men in a flying saucer w/ a joke about being 'probed') but simply as a device to move KP from point A to B it's not so good.
| last white feather chapter 12 . 6/15/2008
FELIX? Oh man, you totally had me thinking it was Kim and Shego lol. Poor Monique, though, now she's dateless...
This is a great story, please keep on writing more chapters