|Reviews for Underneath|
| yonomori chapter 1 . 8/21/2016
I like it, but sometimes, I realy do like Kakashi to become even taller than Minato was. I really wanted everyone to atleast acknowledg him. Yeah, good one. Keep up the nice work.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/12/2016
Loved jiraya's pov. He's still cynical but be cares
| Kita93 chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
Hi I thought this was a fantastic story. I really enjoy your writings. Thank you
| Error 404 - Talent Not Found chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
This hurts in so many different ways. Mostly over Kakashi's nonexistent childhood and the fact that he lives for the dead. The writing style suits this- detached, disembodied, not really belonging to the one it focuses on...Really loved this.
| shikamaru B5 chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
Why did you make me cry? Kakashi! I know the pairings of losing the people close to you too!
| Esquizoide chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
| Lady Barbossa329 chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
So much emotion, it almost had me in tears. I feel horrible for both Kakashi and Jiraiya. They both lost people that were precious to them. Beautifully written story. Thank you for sharing it.
| sc2017 chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
Wow, you are one amazing writer. I loved the bitterness, the angst, the pain, and above all the strength to persevere that overrode everything else. That bit about the scar and how Minato lives on in Kakashi was pure genius. Hats off to you!
| monkey kix ass chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
poor kakashi. but it's kinda cool how you gave him the exact same scar in the exact same location as the yodaime did. nice little piece. thanks for sharing.
| skepsis66 chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
Wow... very bittersweet. I've got lump stuck in my throat now lol. Good job.
| sholmesley chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
Gah! That made me cry; I hope you're happy!
Very emotional read- caught serious!Jiraya perfectly and young!Kakashi was dead-on as well.
:goes off to get tissues and sniffles:
| Kelara chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
Beautifully written und well thought through. Thanks!
| toolazytologin chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
That was an awesome story. It was really poignant.
| irritated reader chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
It could be recent events, but a fanfic has never made me cry before. This was so beautiful. Thanks.
| NoNAMEohmygod chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
That was so cute!
I'm glad I read it.