|Reviews for One Last|
| onisaur chapter 1 . 10/29/2005
i forgot what it felt like to loose myself in a story. your words come alive. the brief exchanges are brilliant. your grammar and sense of timing are clear and concise. each character is strong and carries the weight of growing old differently. i admire your fidelity to the original characters, and as much the lack of oc's. this is an excellent fic.
| Sakura123 chapter 1 . 11/8/2004
Whoa, this was a heavy story, I'm not saying this because of the ratings or warnings in your Summary. This was a really impactive story you've written here, It was indeed sad, but that was your goal wasn't it. I thought it was good, very moving and though-provoking. All of them gone, in one last mission. Tear-jerker worthy.
| Nakuya chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
Well I have a couple this to say about this...
1 That was absolutly awsome very very good but a bit sad leading into my second comment... YOU KILLED THEM! HOW COULD YOU! though this fic was great and good I can't believe you killed them its just... just well *sniffles* Great job.
| inu-kokoro chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
... That is really awesome. Well written, yes indeed. -nods- -speachlessness-