Reviews for Never Eternal
KeeleZeibel chapter 1 . 5/20/2005
It's a nice fic, it shows Sai's more serious side, kinda like when he is playing Go... but there are some things that needs correcting though, one is the fact that Shusaku was letting Sai play all of his games, and that Sai called Shusaku by his real name: Torajiro, Honinbo Shusaku was just a name given to Torajiro because of 'his' ability in playing go
Hiraiwa chapter 1 . 12/4/2004
I loved it! It was really great. I almost cried...
justareviewer chapter 1 . 11/17/2004
Hm... certainly an interesting storyline. It's a refreshing change from the romance stories on I like the way Sai sounds in the fic, though he doesn't usually 'sound' like that in the anime. But this is supposed to be introspective, so I guess you do have writer's license. One error I spotted: He became an expert, the best of his time, until he no longer needed my help to defeat his opponents. The manga states that Shuusaku let Sai play all his matches, not because he needed help, but because he recognised the genius of Sai. And if he didn't play, how could he become better? Then again, I guess he could by watching Sai play. :p
unwell14 chapter 1 . 11/9/2004
good try. not sure whether sai speaks like that though, but who can blame you having not watched the anime before. i like it cuz its really shows Sai as Sai is, (and not like those gay fanfics abt touya and hikaru) and most of the info is correct, so right(write) on!
Mika chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
Original, touching, very good, write more fanfics.