Reviews for Places In Heaven
Guest chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
U mean 2 places in heaven. Sasuke is a traitorous rat and would go to hell for what he did to naruto and the village! Im gonna pretend the traitor died alone as it should be and sakura has grown up and realised its naruto or lee that she should be with!
Tem's Promise chapter 1 . 7/26/2014
Rollercoaster from start to finish. Ending was a nice touch :) forever one of my favorite gems on this site. Made me a little sad to think of Team Seven ending. I enjoyed the haunting vibe it gave off. My favorite bit:
There's a guy who loves a girl who loves a guy. There's an avenger, a servant of darkness bound to the accursed seal puncturing his thus far unmarred swanlike neck, who owes everything to the darkness, who yearns for the North Star, a guiding light and he's been scrabbling in the dark for it, clumsy, soul having yet to shed its baby fat.

There's a guy who loves a girl who loves a guy. There's a demon child, whose dream went unfulfilled but never unheard. He's given up everything, every ambition, every aspiration for acknowledgement, who owes everything to a number of saviors that can be counted on one hand, yearning for Methuselah.

There's a guy who loves a girl who loves a guy. There's a woman who's a girl, and that's all she'll ever be.
Gojugal chapter 1 . 2/13/2014
This made me cry. :(
LadyKryptonite chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
I read this as slam poetry and it was simply beautiful. You've created a piece of art, bravo!
NoeticSky chapter 1 . 4/8/2013



floating on clouds above chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
I love how you wrote this! :)
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
Team 7 as the New Sannin rock.
willam and jack and jake chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
wow beautiful
Higanbana.4 chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
beautiful fic :)
indefinitelyhigh chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
Oh, this was beautiful. Lovely writing.
Deploringly chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
Holy cow. Holy cow. (lovelove)
Raine Haruto chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
confusing yet sad... _ not sure if i got it processed properly through my head. listening to umm... music with a nostalgic/sad feel to it, mixed with classical chinese musical elements, does help set the mood though.
CrimsonAccent chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Wow this was really moving. At first it's kind of weird, and I tried to figure it out. But then you know what? I was just like okay, let go, and flow with it.

It worked.
sasuke fan chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
three graves in the earth three places in haven...dont you dare write something like this ever agin you just mad my day so sad...
Jade-Silverwolf chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
That was really cool! I loved it!
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