|Reviews for Family Bond|
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/28/2016
No offense, but you should put that you don't own the outsiders.
Cool story though.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2015
I love ur thought of how this plot out. Loving it!
| Angel chapter 14 . 10/21/2014
I am speechless ! Beautiful sad believable I refused to sleep all night to read your whole story . My heart is pan gong if that's the word. I am a twin myself and have been in an orphanage so many emotions were brought up. Yes please keep writing! I'll be waiting! Xo
| Shadowhawk279 chapter 6 . 3/4/2013
All of your chapters have been great so far! I love the way you have written Soda, he is very in character, as are the rest of the gang! I'm very excited to have found a good sisterfic that isn't a Mary-Sue, and I can't wait to finish this story as well as your other 6! Keep writing, you are great! Stay gold
| KateCurtis chapter 14 . 1/24/2013
Wonderful story! I really like your alternative ending, too!
| Daisie Faerie chapter 14 . 1/10/2013
I love the alternative ending, the end especially. This is the kind of story that keeps you oh your feet, waiting for more.
| greasergirl2012 chapter 14 . 1/1/2013
Great, great, and great. Iloved everything but the alteritive ending. That was too depressing. you should probably get rid of it. I thought it would be cheesy with a girl but it was the best i've read. Bravo
| XMan 24 chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
The story moves with a steady speed, it is really good and catchy, it brings out all the personalities of the characters.
And please continue writing.
| Dreams.Peace.Love.Happiness chapter 12 . 1/12/2011
ugh! my heart was beating a gazillion miles an hour there! very suspensful...
| emalovelyy chapter 13 . 11/26/2010
i love both endings but in the alternative ending i liked how scout ended up marrying two-bit in this ending
| Sersia chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
Uhm To Kill A Mockingbird would have been written after Scout was born so the time in ur story is a little messed up srry
| sparkle-court chapter 12 . 3/12/2010
I loved your story! it was amazing! Im so excited to read the next story in the series!
| infinite grey chapter 13 . 2/12/2010
Awh, I have to say, I sat here and read this entire fic. I must admit that my heart was wrenching when they took Scout away, but I really liked that she got married to Two-Bit in the end. This was kind of like another book I read - the endings were so different, yet they both had clarity, sort of like this. While reading this chapter, a ton of different emotions went through me. Pity, hate, sympathy, wrath, and love all at the same time. I don't usually R&R, so I'm just going to do my best and share how much I love this particular fic, all in one review.
First of all, I must say, I never saw the whole "People call him Keith, but I still call him Two-Bit" coming. That definitely put the nail in the wood, and was absolutely perfect. I have heard of this fic before; though I never took an interest to Curtis sister fics. The way they bonded was amazing too, and I felt a ping of jealousy go through me. My brother isn't like any of the Curtis boys - which depresses me, lol. I like the small nitwit things you put in here. Such as a four hour game of Monopoly, a wrestling match. This chapter was just...wow.
I can hardly believe Scout doesn't hate Steve. Since he's a canon character, he's really not hard to work with, yet he is, all at the same time. I like how Scout was rooting for him, until Darry had to step in. I'll admit - it was a tearjerker when Scout had that dream of being taken away by authorities, and Darry not helping her. I guess I'm a sucker for an ending that can only lead to me guessing "what will happen next?". This is one of the fics that will have me forever curious as to how you can write so well. How you kept all these characters so...normal, was outstanding. Johnny didn't talk much, but I like how you mentioned him.
Every good review has a few pros and cons, huh? Well, you had quite a few spelling errors through out the story. Mostly in the beginning, near the end is when everything was neat and tidy. The only mistakes I can pinpoint is when you spelled Two-Bit's last name wrong. It is said to have only one T, not two. And you spelled Steve's last name wrong - Randle, not Randall. More then a few punctuation errors, but nothing that can't be fixed.
Wow, this is probably the longest review I've given in a while. I did see that you have six different parts to this fic, and I will probably stay up all night, just to read them. There are many, many things I could say about this whole fic. Out of it all, I have to say each character was handled well. Steve would do anything for Soda, and it's nice to see that you can recognize that.
I could rant on and on, and trust me, I would!, but unfortunately, I'm getting extremely desperate. I might try to review and read, all at the same time, in part 2 of 6. If I don't, then just assume I'm clicking "next chapter" each time I finish a chapter, haha. Extremely well done, and I hope in time, you are more then satisfied with your writing!
| Chapter 7 chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
Omg! this chapter made me cry! and i'm like Scout! i never cry but the end had me in tears! you're really good!
| secondchance123 chapter 14 . 1/28/2010
I loved it, almost made me cry a few times. The whole story touched me :D i'm glad you wrote it.