Reviews for Living
sckraut12 chapter 6 . 7/16/2012
Please continue. I like the story.
ras0629 chapter 6 . 5/3/2011
oh my goodness gracious this story was really really good! by far one of the best ive read on this entire site. it was written well everything flowed together. i wish there was more because i was really into it. I'm going to subscribe just in case you decide to finish it someday. :) thank you for sharing
Darx chapter 6 . 12/27/2007
Huh, I think i like it. I usually go for the more Dom/Letty centric stories, but i like this one. at first i thought that it was somewhat out of character when Brian came back, but then i read it over and i realized that they wouldn't be exactly the same i mean its been 12 years! lol and i like that Mira was the one to knock some sense into the group about brian. its ironic that she's doms kid and you'd think dom would hate brian yet shes the one telling them that he should be there. and pleaase continue!
AnaDry chapter 6 . 8/17/2006
I liked this chapter, please up-date soon.

Mrs Dominic Toretto Aus chapter 6 . 2/1/2006
wicked story pls update it soon
DreamShadows chapter 6 . 1/2/2006
That was really good, you should update ASAP!
liam22 chapter 3 . 4/29/2005
This story is good so far. The only thing is that I thought Mira was only suppose to be 9. No 9 year olds that i have ever meet talk and comprehend like Mira did in this chapter. Maybe she should act more like 9 instead of 19, just something to think about. I like the basic plot though, it's very interesting.
AllAboutAngel chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
Miracle, BJ and Ria are so far great kids. Ria seems a little older than a 3 year old should be though.

There havent been any daughter/mother moments with Mira and Letty yet, just Mira and her dad. Maybe Letty could be more involved in the story, although i realise at the minute its focusing on Brian and Mia, but in future chapters hopefully.

Is it an issue with Letty or with Dom that Letty cant have any more children?

Why was Jamie slagging off Letty to Mira? Who is Jamie? just a girl at school that picks on Mira or is there more to it?

I hope the 2F2F team make a road trip to see Brian and Ria when theyre back in LA. Introducing Rome, Suki and Tej to the Team is always fun, and people write it so many different ways. I cant decide whether i think Letty and Suki would be butting heads or the best of friends lol

Write more soon

Chelle x
Princess Misery chapter 6 . 2/5/2005
liked it always.

update soon!
Paulsgirlygirl chapter 6 . 2/4/2005
Great chapter. I like this story. Can't wait till they meet Ria. She sounds so cute. Anyway, keep up the good work and update soon!
OTHlover04 chapter 6 . 2/3/2005
that was good!
cheer chapter 6 . 2/3/2005
Heya, i think it was fine. and very funny. i would right moreif i could but i too have a heachde and am lucy ot even have had time to read. its along story but ill tell ya later girl, love ya lots, miss ya,c heer
Sweetest Addiction chapter 5 . 1/31/2005
I like ) update soon i found it cute how her name is Miracle because shes a Miracle and Love out of the love between Dom and LEtty!
cheerthis95 chapter 5 . 11/19/2004
Hey, cool chapter! you go ta lot goin on, bu tyouseem to have a handl eon where it's all goin, goodupdate and nice and long too. Thats def a plus, lol. You did a nice job and i cant wait to see where you're heading! if you need a beta, let me know and i'llbe happy to help! later, love cheer
cheerthis95 chapter 4 . 11/19/2004
Hey, i am caught up! Yaya for me, lol., i'm always the last to straglle in to review, lol. at least it feels that way. The only sugestion i have is what i was going to email you about was the switching Povs, which was a;ready brought up. I lke this stry and ihope to see you continue., If it makes you feel any better, when i first started ultimate betryala, i only got lik 3 reviews perchapter so please dont get discouraged. It takes time fir the stories to pick up and gain readers so keep on going, I o flal people shpould be telling you don't worry abpout the reivews, lol, since im like so addicted to them, lmao, but if you love wiriting, thats all that matters and ppl will see that and start to read your work, it may just take time! i give that adive to ppl who are jsut starting out, lol, and i know its hard to follow, even for mysefl so i kinda feel like im being hypocirivitical, but honestly, it sthte truth, if i only got one reivew, i woud keep on wiritng, i mean, i love them and thye make my days, but its the wiriting tht i lve, i use it to escape real life, lol, Im also heavly drugged on pain meds a tthe mment so i hop[e this all makes sense, lol., i think you got a greatr start and i would be sad if ya stoppeed writing, so please don't. My emial box is always open and may the wwriting ideas be with you (since they have all lfet me lately)LMAO. Jk, i mean i hope you do ogt ideas and i have had none latey but i would hope fot the deas to goot oyou either way, if i had ideas or not, lol. Ok, now that im rambling and hopefully have made you laugh at how silly i am, i shall go try to write some of my own, such as turning lanes, hehe. later., love cheer
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