Reviews for Simple and Clean
Guest chapter 1 . 10/4/2014
I really liked this story, despite the ending, but what happened to it because for some reason I can't read anymore than the first chapter.
jesh18 chapter 1 . 9/9/2006
...hm interesting...
Miyayi chapter 44 . 8/1/2006
That was an amazing story. really really sad at the end because i wanted them to be together and not have either of them die. but i guess that's how most stories end so...yey for being unique with your story ending. i must say it was really really good.

and yeah.
Knaix chapter 44 . 7/26/2006
WHAT? I haven't read in a while and you killed CLOUD?TT_TT

Poor yuna..._

Congratulations though for completing the fic...*sobs*
ArcBus chapter 44 . 7/24/2006
NO! CLO-UDO!

What! WHAT! I WANNA KNOW WHAT YOU LACED THE STORY WITH! I have been to blind to see what it was!

Well, that was a great story from start to finish. I enjoyed it. Well done! :)
Killer Fire Fox chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
I love your story so much! *crying* I have never cried for a story before and yours was just so great! *hands you lots and lots of sweets* I really hope you keep going but I don't want to push you...but if you don't I think I will have to kill Tifa again to kill my anger...but that really wouldn't bother you would it...oh well...I love it so much and if anyone says other wise THEY WILL DIE WITH TIFA! *pulls out sword and hunt down flamers...*

Killer Fire Fox

P.S. Write me anytime you want to talk or anything! Bye for now Love you!
moonlilly chapter 44 . 7/19/2006
Moonlilly wants a sequel. And I wish the fight scene with Cloud and Sephy was a bit longer... AND YOU KILLED CLOUD OFF! YOU KNOW, IF I WASN'T HYPED UP ON SUGAR RIGHT NOW, I WOULD REALLY CALL YOU A CRAZY EVIL VAMPIRE! But I want a sequel pwease? Cloud better come back...
hotaru89 chapter 44 . 7/19/2006
e! this was a rly rly rly rly rly rly rly rly rly god fanfiction! i hope u do a sequel!(i will b rly HAPY if u do) CLOUD! NO!
Killer Fire Fox chapter 43 . 7/17/2006
*crys* Poor Cloud Poor Yuna Poor Baby!

*hands you cookies* Thank you for updating!
ArcBus chapter 43 . 7/13/2006
Aww... Poor Yuna...

I don't know why, but I find this whole story weirdly addictive and interesting... And it's not even the sort of story I would read, and I probably would overlook this pairing, but something's just DRAWN me in!

Esh... ... Esh... What's gonna happen next, I wonder?
moonlilly chapter 43 . 7/12/2006
It's just so sad. Poor, Poor Makena. And those lines:

“What about her eyes?” She asked slowly only for the mercenary to shake his head sadly.

“I don’t know Yun, she never opened them.”

SO SAD!

Not to be mean but it sorta is her fault. Cloud can take a hit or two. He survived Masamune being drived into his chest I think he could of survived Tidus' sword.
hotaru89 chapter 43 . 7/12/2006
ah its to sad! :( plz kep updating!
Monochromatic Pylon chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
Wow, very nice . Yuna and cloud, interesting pair!
hotaru89 chapter 42 . 7/6/2006
omg no! so sadd :*( wut happened to yuna? e plz updatee realy really son!
moonlilly chapter 42 . 7/4/2006
*GASPS* The... The baby! Now I'm crying. I hate to see a baby die, born or not. Dammit! Cloud needs to go blitzer hunting! I'll help him! *Readies Shotgun* Tidus needs to come back! Bastard needs to die... again... sorta... Hehe...

And Leon and Rikku got married! So beautiful. Cloud promised Yuna that the baby would come first, right? Or did I read that wrong? That's gotta suck. Nice chappy!

*moonlilly*
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