|Reviews for The Violin|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/21/2015
Aghhhhhhh I am fangirling right now aghhhh
| Irrevocable Memory chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
I noticed some mistakes, like:
"The rested and continued on their journey" this and
"He heart was beating faster and faster" this and
"his sectary handed him a slip of paper" this
and a few others, but I'm sure they just slipped by.
The story feels a bit rushed, and the words feel a bit tense or formal. The plot is also quite cliche, and I guess I just couldn't find that one thing that should stand out (well, in this case, I do suppose that it's the violin).
However, with some minor adjustments, I'm sure this story can turn out to be quite great :) Good luck!
| RNstories chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
| TheMaskedGirl chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
| deadflo chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
| Yumi's Twin-Kagome chapter 1 . 11/5/2004
I Miss When People Write One Chapte After The Other But Oh Well.
I Need More Of Your Story! It Is One Of The Best Stories So Far! :) :) :) :) :)
| animated freak chapter 1 . 11/4/2004
wow ... that was pretty good, you're very talented kekeke ... the ending was alright but i wanted more kekeke lolz ... im stoOpid newaiz keep up da good work
| kaze-mononoke-nedge chapter 1 . 11/3/2004
how, absolutly, cute! This is the best oneshot i have ever read! kudos to ya! N e way, tis very good, very very good.
| Viky chapter 1 . 11/3/2004
| Jade chapter 1 . 11/3/2004
I loved it...perfect...not too much detail but enough...