|Reviews for Lost The Heart|
| Midnight Memories chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
I know this is really old, but I just wanted to congratulate you on how beautifully written it is. You incorporated Beatrice's lines very nicely, and your words are all obviously well-picked and quite touching. Surely one of the best fan-poem about Beatrice and Benedick on this site!
| astrum202 chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
Coolness. I forgot how much I loved this play so I decided to find some fanfics on it. I'm impressed you were Beatrice as a freshman. Anyway it is nice to find reminders that Beatrice and Benedick were in love before the play started...which is what this is. Also loved the interlacing of the lines, though the rhyme sceam was a little weird. wish me luck as my high school play will be 12th night. can't wait to audition
| Steeldust-01 chapter 1 . 1/18/2006
This is simply wonderful !
I love it
| DeathByMonkees chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
Wonderful poem! Wonderful! I also wondered a little about those lines...
| Queen Eleni chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
Hey, cool poem! I saw that you reviewed my story, so went to look up your writings. I too have always wondered about Benedick and Beatrice's past; I really wish Shakespeare had elaborated on that. I like how you used lines from the play within the poem itself.
| EreshkigalGirl chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
Eh...I liked the idea, but I think it could have been better if you had done it as a ficlet rather than a poem.
| PirateChick who is too lazy to sign in chapter 1 . 11/4/2004
Aw, that's good... My school did 'Much Ado About Nothing' last year, though I didn't even get a speaking part... But I did get to swing dance, though, since the director set the play somewhere in the 40's. Ah, good times, good times...