Reviews for Restraint
redarien chapter 1 . 7/11
I like this thought

-he feels it like an ache, like an escalating action potential, when he has to hold himself back. I think so much of his constant fidgeting and nervous energy would dissipate if he could just TOUCH someone, pass the charge off like a building static surge
Shadows-of-Realm chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
Great work, the emotion was good
wanderingsmith chapter 1 . 10/14/2008
-incoherent gibbering-

perfect! love how you chanel Jack!
Curuchamion chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
You know, I never thought about it before, but you're absolutely right. And I love the last sentence-I usually think stuff like that sounds corny, but this one was perfect!
smithcrafter chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
Very good word portrait of the Col.
Quinndolynn chapter 1 . 11/12/2004
Wow. What a perfect ending. And the bit about Teal'c is so true...
MillionMoments chapter 1 . 11/5/2004
I think this is just so true of the character! Nicely done!
cherryblossomjen chapter 1 . 11/4/2004
That's a really interesting theory (and story). I've noticed the rare moments when Jack is so happy he grabs one of his tem in a hug (or a sude shoulder hus...) and I truly love those moments. I think I would agree with you that it just looks "right."

Great job.
macisgate chapter 1 . 11/4/2004
That's a really great fic! I really like how you explored that aspect of the characters. Really well done and well written. Great job!
Lerrinus chapter 1 . 11/4/2004
Yay! Very nicely done - great discriptives for Jack - Loved the last couple lines, they were perfect! Keep up the great work! :-)
jessmerrick chapter 1 . 11/4/2004
isabel chapter 1 . 11/4/2004
Oh my God...that was so deep and beautiful. How the heck can you manage to know such a complex character so well, and be able to translate him so movingly? I don't really know how, but please keep doing it...
Mara Jade Jedi chapter 1 . 11/4/2004
Very poignant and insightful. I totally agree with the idea of Jack being such a tactile the show he's allways fiddling with something, whether its a pen, his gun, whatever. Beautifully written too. Well done!
SG1-Fanfic chapter 1 . 11/3/2004
Nicely written.
pain in the mikta chapter 1 . 11/3/2004
Impressive little piece of insight about Jack's character! Bravo!
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