|Reviews for Fetch!|
| Joker's Specter chapter 1 . 12/12/2004
Hmm...I see-giving the readers the idea that Mia's waiting for Isaac and Garet when she's not waiting for them? Tricky. :P
Good descriptions. I probably would've found this funnier if I wasn't kind of...well, depressed at the thought of my brother leaving for two years. Anyway, keep up these one-shots!
| Lightning-Dono chapter 1 . 11/9/2004
'“You wanna play some more fetch?
| Inferno-Hero chapter 1 . 11/8/2004
| Digicowboy chapter 1 . 11/3/2004
I liked it, short as it was. But why exactly did you have to rush it? Were you working on a schedule laid out by fanfiction goblins? It's fanfiction! We write it purely for our pleasure, at least in theory. If you aren't happy with the ending, hold back and fine tune it. Who's going to complain? Besides, it's your story, not like they can tell you what to do. I tend to think the extra time is worth it, but I liked the tone of the piece. Kudos to you, although I wasn't sure if Chocolate cake and coffee were things they'd have in the GS universe...