|Reviews for Incase the Prince is really dumb|
| RavenDove chapter 2 . 7/26/2005
The plot line is kind of nice. The charactorization is really close. The humor however is a little too anacronistic in most places, and you need to watch out for repeated words.
I liked the part about leaving a buisness card with the Glass slipper, and sending an away team to find what had died in a certain part of Jelico's anatomy, though the second A bomb in the Jelico joke kind of spoiled it.
The Jel-o-man, Justin Timberlake, and Celine Dion refrences are too out of place. Same with the Oscar Mayer wiener joke, and the refrence to the Charle Brown Cartoons. These things just aren't in the back story for Shelby.
Lyda Mae (RavenDove) Huff
| Hurley's Belial chapter 2 . 12/29/2004
well, this is weird, you can't deny that. I can't say I understand it, really, but it is entertaining. Keep writing!