Reviews for Tower |
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![]() ![]() ![]() mad props to you for this author's note, god bless you XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Que maravillosa historia. Fue tan bonita, entretenida y divertida. Me alegro tanto haberla leído. Me gustó mucho, en serio. Gracias por escribir esta genial historia. Saludos y te mando un abrazo de oso |
![]() ![]() ![]() An amazing story with an amazing flow! I'm really glad it's complete because I hate cliff-hangers. Thank you for the great effort! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is like a Teen Titans episode playing out and i love it lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() You made me laugh several times, great story so far! |
![]() ![]() AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH |
![]() ![]() I like big butts is by sir mix-a-lot |
![]() ![]() The whole thing is set to last for 2 days, the whole thing too 11 years to finish. |
![]() ![]() "Any questions?" Raven asked the shell-shocked pair with a hard look. "Tons." Robin said, his eyes still opened wide in shock. "They'll have to wait until after the meeting." "…Meeting's cancelled." "Great, we're leaving then." Favorite exchange this whole chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not sure if you still check reviews, but I thought I'd ambush you with an essay and kick up some of that dust you thought was cleared. I've been a fan of this story for about as long as it's been around, and admittedly when you took your monster hiatus, I took an even BIGGER one from the story and just now completed your last few chapters years after you finished writing them. So why pick Lucky Number 26 to write this on? Because this one is my absolute favorite. And it's not even because of Beast Boy and Raven finally sealing the deal. 'Nevermore' was my favorite episode in the original Teen Titans show and will always be. I loved the idea of each of Raven's emotions having their own sentience, and it always amused me to think that while they're technically the same person, Beast Boy gets his own Power Ranger color-coordinated harem. Your execution of their interactions was impeccable, and it just about felt like I was watching a second episode with more of the mirror - something that I truly believe they could've expanded on with little complaint from the fan base. Anyway, after years of drifting, my interest in creating more "what-if" worlds through fanfiction has been renewed, and as a completionist fan, I wanted to reread this story from front to back and put it to bed for good. I'm glad I did. Still, I feel nostalgic reading about the updates in your real life, especially through the movie theater screen. Because even though I'm a few years younger, I'm now as old as you were when you wrote it, and your accomplishments already beat the shit out of mine. No fulfilling job, home, or relationship of any kind. I guess I can't hate you for finding happiness, but Jesus Wept, save some for the rest of us! I digress though, it was a blast to grow up with this story, even though the series has been dead for some time, and neither TT Go nor the edgy dark preview of the new movie seem to be doing anything other than make me miss the olden days. Back then I despised shipping Raven with Beast Boy, because I thought MY feelings for Raven burned hotter than the changeling's, but the thought you poured into this story and its characters makes me quite happy to be proven wrong. Now I have no CHOICE but to grow up, THANKS. Anyway, hope all is well with you and yours, and even if you never see this, it's no sweat. Rather than commenting on each individual chapter I read, it's just tradition for me to leave a long, thoughtful review at the end of the few stories on this site I actually care about (my short fave's list will testify). Thanks for all the laughs, flutters, teases, and homicide-evoking cliffhangers. And don't stay Hidden for too long! :P ~EE |
![]() ![]() If you didn't know of the prophecy and Garfield's real name, maybe you should've... [Ear rape voice] ...Read the comics... [Normal voice] ...Rather than just watch the show. Still, I'll admit, I liked this story. It had it's ups and downs, but it seemed to pull through. I look forward to you making more cool stories and fanfics. |
![]() ![]() 1.) That seems like a really weird moment to kiss someone. 2.) Why would they still make the claim that they're still only friends if they just kissed? 3.) I think Garfield should've used the Heimlich maneuver on Raven if she was CHOKING, not CPR. 4.) I'm beginning to dislike this story now, but because I'm nice, seeing some things that I actually seem to like in this story (such as the relationship between Garfield Logan and Rachel Roth not being so sudden and cliché), and since I'm changing the way I imagine a few of these events (ex. Dick Grayson being Nightwing instead of Robin, the characters being able to wear civilian clothes, having the characters be able to say each other's real names, etc.), I'm continuing to read. |
![]() ![]() Although Raven's real name is literally just Raven, her civilian alias is Rachel Roth, not Racheal Bird. And Beast Boy is Garfield "Gar" Logan, not Gar Funkel; what kind of name is FUNKEL?! I'm sorry to say, but I'm disappointed at the names you chose for their civilian aliases and would've rather had you use their normal aliases. And I know they're trying to be unrecognizable, but the names you gave them are lame. |
![]() ![]() I get that this is suppose to be more about the show than the actual comics, but I still can't help but feel bothered by Starfire having 9 stomachs, as it has never been said in the comics that she has 9 of them, and as much as I loved the show, I hate that the directors of the show made the decision to give her that many. |
![]() ![]() Actually, Cyborg CAN fly. |