Omg I loved it so sweet :’)

Yeah, this is the point where the story really starts to run out of steam and fizzle. It honestly feels somewhat disjointed. Like, there were about three stories in here that don't really relate to each other. I understand that you're trying to provide differences in kind, but when these competing story threads are so disconnected, they start to undermine each other. It makes the whole thing feel weighted down and sluggish to read. You can't expect to hold my interest as a reader if the story feels like it doesn't hold interest in itself. Other then that, it's pretty good. You had a really strong start, the trouble is just keeping that momentum going.

AMAZING STORY, I WAS HOOKED. I ALSO LOVED THE LITTLE BIT YOU ADDED AT THE END OF THE EPILOGE. THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS WONDERFUL STORY!

I love it so much I’m gonna cry! It’s my second time reading it and BOY do I love it! Especially a year later UGH LOVE U AND THE STORY HAVE A GR8 1!

Omg I thought I would never get to the end! But it was worth the time it took, one day took a billion chapters lol such a good story I highly recommend it

Ok so I'm like really late to reply but, I'm really enjoying this story. And I've not finished it... yet

jk you're great :)

Well done.

Also, a crush is one of those things that can only last one minute. In reality, they last until the target of those feelings does something the person hates or doesn't approve of.

Those feelings Raven has for Beast Boy can not be classified as a crush. A crush is just infatuation towards someone because they seem ideal to you. It's what people call love at first sight. It can't be that way with Raven and Beast Boy. First, she clearly isn't infatuated with him, and he really isn't an ideal love interest. Second, if she had a crush on him, it would be something she would question. She would hide it, but she wouldn't deny it to herself. What she feels for Beast Boy is actually love. First, she has known him for an estimated two years. Second, they have had moments with each other. Nevermore, Spellbound, and The Beast Within are the biggest ones. And Three, Beast Boy is the only Titan who actually actively tries to get closer to Raven. I will except you calling the other encounters crushes, but not this one.

It's called James and the Giant Peach, Not Jimmy and the Giant Apricot.

That was so sweet, a great read.

10 years... Its like...its...its... Omg, youre my hero, my inspiration, my muse. Im better person for you and only you (okno, creppy). Btw Trevor is hilarious, i need more of his... His...idk what the fuck is but i need it(?)

You little troll under the smallest bridge. I jumped out of bed as soon as i saw that she "kissed" him. Only to come back to it being apart of his love driven imagination.

I love it so much ! Specially the epilogue! It was unexpected LMAO she already said yes. Geez you're one heck of a writer! Season 4 of Teen Titans go is out. You should watch the Bbrae episode omg our ship!