Reviews for Reality or Illusion
eeveemew chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
Aw man...
calliopechild chapter 4 . 12/21/2005
AH! OMFG! XD Holy crap, that is a freaking great freaky twisted ending! Now I'm all like "Everything is the Matrix!" and stuff. Great story, this one was a lot of fun.
Tewi chapter 4 . 12/2/2005
OMG that is such a great ending (well not so much for the guys that don't know anything), but this is such a great story-i love it!
Cassie chapter 4 . 10/7/2005
Oh, how sad. Nice twist though, but somehow I just knew you would have to end it like that.
Reinbeauchaser chapter 4 . 12/6/2004
I remember reading the fourth chapter, but I'm shocked I haven't reviewed it.

What a great ending...leave it like that...it smacks of surrealism and I can just hear Outer Limits music playing in the background.

Ah, nothing like unresolved terror!

Still, there's a deep seated need in me to see a happy ending. It's just me, though, so just ignore my rants.

Nice job.

Be blessed.
Dory's human replica chapter 4 . 11/8/2004
this is definitely one of your better stories, although they are all good! there so should be more to this - i love it! anything focussed on leo is great!
SKRoberts chapter 4 . 11/8/2004
Say WHAT? :O
BubblyShell22 chapter 4 . 11/8/2004
Wow! This was interesting. Any chance of a sequel? You are a great writer. Keep up the good work.
Cat-kun chapter 4 . 11/6/2004
kol

Bloody Sai: Nice verry nice little sista :wiping drool from pants:
Darktiger2 chapter 4 . 11/6/2004
stares. Okay...

O.O...

Weird, but interesting...
pacphys chapter 4 . 11/5/2004
AH! You don't really intend to leave it like that do you?
chibiroseangel chapter 4 . 11/5/2004
I HOPE YOU PLAN ON WRITING A PART 2 TO THIS! BECAUSE I FOR ONE WOULD LIKE TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS! HOW DID I KNOW YOU WERE GOING TO DO THAT FOR THE ENDING! AT ANY RATE, KEEP IT UP! AND MORE OF THIS STORY PLEASE!
Donny's Girl chapter 1 . 11/5/2004
O, UPDATE, UPDATE! HURRY HRRY!

Monica
Reinbeauchaser chapter 2 . 11/5/2004
Okay, concerning chapter one and that second sentence, "Might as well get over it with." I finally realized what you were trying to say, ditz that I am. Still, it wasn't quite worded correctly...so... this is, I believe, what you were aiming for! 'Well he might as well get it over with." Then, as I just a moment ago re-read that chapter I could see you've already changed it! Cool! Or, um, I thought it read the way it did originally and it was my eyes playing tricks on me? That's the thing about making changes on fan fiction, there isn't any record of the pre-correction phase and then reviewers, such as myself, feel as if they are losing their minds. Hmm - might be more true than not! LOL

Still, this is a terrific story!

Be blessed.
Reinbeauchaser chapter 3 . 11/5/2004
Ah, I don't know if you have the enhanced perks with this site, but I couldn't bring up the review window for chapter 4. I went back to all the other chapters and could do it, but not with chapter 4. So, you will have multiple counts on your reader hit that might be me! LOL Sorry.

Anyway, this ended perfectly, as it should with the suspense tag in the summary. Don't change a thing, even though there will be reviewers who will want you to. Up to you, but I wouldn't change it.

Anyway, nicely done all the way around. Remember the commas, though, with any future stories! :0)

Be blessed.
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