Reviews for There Was a Girl, There Were Two Boys
Skyrere chapter 1 . 2/7/2014
Damn... very well done.
:D
Guest chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
Aaaawww, so perfect! Probably the best take on unrequieted love I've read!
Fushigi Doll chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
Kiba and Shino's friendly bantering amuses me even until finishing now. You amaze me too and I have high respects for you. You have this natural and casual way of writing your story that leaves your readers satisfied with each story you make. Great job :D
naash chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
that wasbeautiful
NiceGuyProse chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
Cute story. :)

My only issue was the fact that Shino is a model - seems a very OC career for him.
Sepsis chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
awwr..:D awesome.
Penguin Pop chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
i love it
behindthescenes chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
Awh this was the cutest :):) .
sshhhhhhhhh chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
aw this is very cute :)
OriginalBubble chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
Damn, u don't know how i love this team, i love them all but this one makes me go mushy. *sighing* thankyou man.
bulanbiru chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
Aw...

So sweet...

Like it!
Garowyn chapter 1 . 10/27/2006
That was bittersweet and I definitely did not expect the ending to be like that. However, good work. Nice twist of events.
Mr. Despair chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
You know what the title made me think of? The fact that there's one girl in every team (and even with the sensei's...)Me thinks Naruto creator likes threesomes/foursomes with one girl...

But enough with my perverted musings. Down to business, now.

I loved it. Curse you Naruto-kun...

Aw, but he's cool too. I still love the totally awesome Shino Hinata though...everytime I think of it, my heart just swells with a great happiness.
Seductive Venus chapter 1 . 7/16/2006
I don't think I ever got around to writing a review for this one! It's a favorite of mine ever since I read it last year~! It's got a truly unexpectedly twisted plot that got me laughing and crying at the same time! Your trademark humor shines through and your treatment of the characters are natural and easy. I laughed at their friendly banter and sympathized with their broken hearts. And plus, it's got KibaHina and NaruHina and ShinoHina! What more can we ask for? Another classic! I loved it!
mandarin'peel chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
wah its so touching T.T Tears were brought to my eyes. If only Hinatat knew, its not fair for them 2 to carry all the burden is it?

such a powerful story told in simple conversation-its great
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