|Reviews for Addictive Blur|
| bffimagine chapter 1 . 10/25/2005
Aw... I suppose the spectrum between violet and brown is quite large considering how different Ken and Ran are...
| Krysana chapter 1 . 11/9/2004
wow! very nicely written! i like it a lot!
| olivia-yuymaxwell chapter 1 . 11/8/2004
wonderfully written *not to mentioned that u've done it at ur class* :p
more of ranken,ne? _
| Mistress of Darkness I chapter 1 . 11/7/2004
this was really good. i enjoyed the idea of it and way it was written alot.
| ravenn rose chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
so, I originally reviewed in lj, but I was supposed to review here, and when I tried to go back, and just copy and paste, but something's up with lj, so I had to re-write this...here goes...
I really liked this, despite all the mistakes, and the fact that i got slightly lost in the middle lol...the way you protrayed Ran was really ineteresting, from you I've ever only seen him as Aya, but here, ionno, U showed us his vulnerable side...also, I liked the fact, that for once, you showed us Ken as the stronger of the two, the all-knowing in a way...
The way you displayed his feelings were from a mind, instead of ana nalysis of one's thoughts, it you understand that...also, Ran had a weird grateful, spiteful way about him, that fitted his character quite well...
My favorite sections would be the Addicted and Withdrawal...really liked the way you wrote those...and the ending...wow...it had such a finality about it, yet it left so much opened and unanswered...but its tone just screamed it over...ionno how to explain it...
And, once again, I understood it, thats about all i can really say, I just got it...and I felt like I knew exactly how he felt, even though, in any way, had I ever experienced any of that...
Anyway, great, as always, just fix those little mistakes, and it'll be perfect
| HeatherR chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
O, I liked it a lot! A LOT! That was great. I didn't mind the breaks so much since you explained about them in the beginning. Cool, sweet story for being written during a class. Did it help you remember the stages of addiction?
| HeavenGoddess chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
whoa...that is deep. very deep. but good. i love hot showers. they do take away pain and stress! anyway continue
| asinine chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
Ah, I really like this. It's just... really simplistic, and I like the word choices. Addiction, denial, remission... Everything fits. You're right, the ending is a bit odd, but it's not like it doesnt' fit. It seems like there should be more to it.
| BengalCat chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
it's a bit.. err... strange...? no, that doesn't describe it. it's beautiful in a... sort of... empty, painful way. i think that's how you ought to feel after killing someone for the first time... and i'm writing stuff that makes no sense... -.-
anyway, it's beautiful
| Wai - Aki chapter 1 . 11/5/2004
I LOVE this. Ran's thoughts and actions and the way he views Ken. I love that he wasn't unaffected by his first kill. You didn't write him as cold and unfeeling, you made him human. Lovely work.
| empyreal chapter 1 . 11/5/2004
Awesome, just awesome. I love the angst, the atonement, the healing through suffering together. Just all around great. The details, focus, everything just fit the fic perfectly. Can't wait to see more from you - or an update to In Fear of (