Reviews for Addictive Blur
bffimagine chapter 1 . 10/25/2005
Aw... I suppose the spectrum between violet and brown is quite large considering how different Ken and Ran are...
Krysana chapter 1 . 11/9/2004
wow! very nicely written! i like it a lot!
olivia-yuymaxwell chapter 1 . 11/8/2004
wonderfully written *not to mentioned that u've done it at ur class* :p

more of ranken,ne? _
Mistress of Darkness I chapter 1 . 11/7/2004
this was really good. i enjoyed the idea of it and way it was written alot.
ravenn rose chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
so, I originally reviewed in lj, but I was supposed to review here, and when I tried to go back, and just copy and paste, but something's up with lj, so I had to re-write goes...

I really liked this, despite all the mistakes, and the fact that i got slightly lost in the middle lol...the way you protrayed Ran was really ineteresting, from you I've ever only seen him as Aya, but here, ionno, U showed us his vulnerable side...also, I liked the fact, that for once, you showed us Ken as the stronger of the two, the all-knowing in a way...

The way you displayed his feelings were from a mind, instead of ana nalysis of one's thoughts, it you understand that...also, Ran had a weird grateful, spiteful way about him, that fitted his character quite well...

My favorite sections would be the Addicted and Withdrawal...really liked the way you wrote those...and the had such a finality about it, yet it left so much opened and unanswered...but its tone just screamed it over...ionno how to explain it...

And, once again, I understood it, thats about all i can really say, I just got it...and I felt like I knew exactly how he felt, even though, in any way, had I ever experienced any of that...

Anyway, great, as always, just fix those little mistakes, and it'll be perfect
HeatherR chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
O, I liked it a lot! A LOT! That was great. I didn't mind the breaks so much since you explained about them in the beginning. Cool, sweet story for being written during a class. Did it help you remember the stages of addiction?
HeavenGoddess chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
whoa...that is deep. very deep. but good. i love hot showers. they do take away pain and stress! anyway continue
asinine chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
Ah, I really like this. It's just... really simplistic, and I like the word choices. Addiction, denial, remission... Everything fits. You're right, the ending is a bit odd, but it's not like it doesnt' fit. It seems like there should be more to it.

Good job!
BengalCat chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
it's a bit.. err... strange...? no, that doesn't describe it. it's beautiful in a... sort of... empty, painful way. i think that's how you ought to feel after killing someone for the first time... and i'm writing stuff that makes no sense... -.-

anyway, it's beautiful
Wai - Aki chapter 1 . 11/5/2004
I LOVE this. Ran's thoughts and actions and the way he views Ken. I love that he wasn't unaffected by his first kill. You didn't write him as cold and unfeeling, you made him human. Lovely work.

- Wai
empyreal chapter 1 . 11/5/2004
Awesome, just awesome. I love the angst, the atonement, the healing through suffering together. Just all around great. The details, focus, everything just fit the fic perfectly. Can't wait to see more from you - or an update to In Fear of (