Yes, that's how you spell Jin-e.

Well, I don't think that chapter was very bad. Sure, the dialogue was a little fast, but it was an overall good chapter. The bathroom scenes were quite humorous! It was interesting how it happened first to Shinta, and then to Yahiko.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter, especially since you let out a little hint as to its contents.

Till the next one,

~*Lynn*~

this was wonderful and intriguing, so far aside from the slight lack of detail which could be repaired this story is most excellent and i can't wait to relish the next chappie_~

(oh yeah this is how I write stories and fanfic not how i talk what u see in paretheses is how i talk notice the difference but all the stuff i wrote up there is true 2 every single last word enjoy and ur writin)

this is a wonderful story thogh you could focus a bit more on details but othert than that I look foward and can't wait to relish the next chappie_

Whew, you work fast. Updates are great!

Your story is moving along at a fast pace, which is perfectly fine. However, You might want to go into a little more detail. Then again, that's just me. It's perfectly fine the way it is, but if you try to speed up the pace or anything i think it would be too rushed. It's a little rushed the way it is now, but it's not bad, i could just be getting used to reading some of those longer fics...

I'm not trying to be evil (contrary to my name). After all, it is your story and it should be written the way YOU want it to be written. i seriously don't care if it's rushed or as slow as molassas... it's still good enough to search out and read. That, reminds me, i didn't forget it's name! _ i found it again!

PLEASE continue to update. I'll keep reviewing! (if i don't forget...)

Hmm...about the exceptance of Sano, it was a little rushed. Not too rushed, but enough to where it's a little unbelievable.

You also spelled "red-headed" wrong, but that's a tiny error.

The fight scene was very well done, though. The little tidbit into the next chapter is wetting my appetite for more. Till the next chapter!

~*Lynn*~

Cool, this fic has got me very interested! , please update soon!

little_sango

Hey, this was the best chapter yet. All these futuristic scenes remind me of a book I read a while back - "1984."

Now Sano and Yahiko have been introduced. One wonders what Sano is up to!

I also like the nice, light humor you use in your chapters. We all know how devine Kaoru cooks!

Looking forward to the next chapter,

~*Lynn*~

And now we're in the future. Good, I wonder how Shinta will manage with a sword in futuristic combats. :)

As a matter of fact, I have read Angel's Command. I liked it. (In response to 'no one's friend')

WOT!

YAY! The Rurouni Kenshin version of THE FLYING DUTCHMAN! That's a new one, but a very good idea. Have you also read THE ANGEL'S COMMAND? Sorry, just curious. I appreciated the bell tolling signifying 'it was time to leave' when the dude went off on his last journey to die... though i don't think most people will know what that was all about, but more reason for them to read a good book, ne?

You have a really good plot line and the story's off to a wonderful start. I wish you good luck and hope to see the next update soon.

HUZZAH!

You want more in your reviews? Okay...

Really nicely written dialogue between your characters; Kenshin is true to Watsuki's design (even in a futuristic sense!), Kenshin's mind-set is parctcularly well-developed, and I am eager to see what's going to heppen next, now that Kaoru is in the picture.

Also, these quick updates are positively delicious. _~

(Was that criticism good enough?)

~*Lynn*~

Wow, I didn't expect an update this fast. Now the story is picking up...

I've read "The Flying Dutchman" before. Very interesting poem.

Good job on this chapter!

~*Lynn*~

I like the prologue. It's an intriguing start. :)

Shinta probably wouldn't have had leather in his shoes though. Shoes in Japan are traditionally made of fibres (straw) or wood IIRC. There are several different types of shoes but none that I can recall immediately have leather in them.

Anyway I like the whole set-up. Next part, please. :)

Hey, me again,

Brutally honest? Okay then...I thought this story is starting off very well. It caught my interest immediately.

Please, by all means, keep going. I am very much looking foreward to the next chapter.

~*Lynn*~