Reviews for Surveillance and Concealment
ohbeautifuldelilah chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
This story is pure GENIUS! I've only seen a few Team Gai fanfics because the others didn't pique my interest but none of them have ever gotten me so interested as this! You have remarkable talent for narration and your plot is dynamic as it is reasonable. I can't put into words how much I enjoyed imagining Neji and Lee as they did one of the most insane exercises known to man not to mention how Neji practically killed Lee just to stop him. All in all, this was indeed one of the most EPIC fanfics for team Gai or any team, for that matter. Keep up the awesome work!
I.Deal.In.Dreams chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
Eeeeeeeeee! So cute there at the end! And of course, truly comic and hilarious throughout (humor is quite a feat to pull off...and you did it exceptionally). I'm laughing even now just imagining Lee hiding in Tenten's closet and Neji crouched underneath her bed...oh team gai...I do love you so :)
Dudly chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
God, your Tenten sounds like a dork. That might come from Neji's opinion of her as a bad ninja, but I happen to think she would have noticed Lee. Y'know. She has an eye for detail and she's not completely stupid.
pisceanchic101 chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
aww! How cute! AND genius too!
Reeve's-Revenge chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
lovingmylife chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
That was so cute i love nejitenten and lee was so funny
ms. phishy chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
Oh, this was funny, though I can't see Lee peeping on Tenten in the shower, even if it is for a mission! Still, funny though.
Hyuuga Tenten ftw chapter 1 . 7/8/2006

What ARE you doing here Neji?
Girl of 1000 Loves chapter 1 . 6/18/2006
This was great. It was really funny. You get pie. :D
anonymous-lemonade chapter 1 . 3/25/2006

You rock beyond comprehension? J/K! Great job. I loved the humor! My GOSH Lee was just so loveable in this fic! GO TENTEN x NEJI!
Amasian chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
Hahahaha, VERY CUTE! This was a very cute Team Gai fic, and the ending was just... impulsively cute ) Describing Neji in this situation was genius, and good job to you!
openwindow chapter 1 . 2/3/2006
The Demonic Ninjas 3 chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
lol LOVE this story! so funny! keep up the great work. I have to agree with Neji and say that the mission was crazy but then again it brought Neji and Tenten a little closer right? lol great job -thumbs up and does the good guy pose PING- oh gods... i think i blinded some people lol...Lee and Gai are getting to me :P

~The Demonic Ninjas 3
False-Image chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
Cute! Hahaha, poor Neji. Actually, poor Tenten! That's gotta be creepy, hehehe. Great fic!
Crazy Sardines chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
Lol Hahaha. The story was really nice though Neji was a bit out of character. I like how you portray the Gai's team. It's just how I imangined they would be. Nice work! :)
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