Reviews for Third Chances
crystlshake chapter 9 . 10/27/2005
Lots of good character stuff in this story. The part with Nodoka and Kodachi at the Kuno mansion with the follow up with Sasuke was really moving. It added a lot of character depth to all three. The same can be said when the preasure on Shampoo was revieled. Its suprising what even a little piece of information can do to drasticly change how someone or something is percieved. Having Shampoo tease Ranma was a great way to continue to characterize and releive some of the ambient tension and serious mood. I look forward to the next chapter to see where the new fiance brigade goes with their new comraderie. That and the eventual reintroduction of Tachi and what lengths the cast will go to to try reeling him back into reality.
dana-san chapter 9 . 10/25/2005
WOW - great chapter. Really like your depiction of Akane and the consequences of her facing her reality.
tiger chapter 9 . 10/16/2005
More Please.
Drkjester chapter 9 . 10/2/2005
This chapter had a sad beauty to it. I feel for Akane and am glad for where you have taken her character. I am torn on the whole harem idea though. I honestly would like Ranma to be a man and pick one (nabiki) and we find out that he did remember that night and was just working to figure out his own feelings on it. The harem idea is a copout for not making him to choose and this is what it is about in a sense. Oh well my two damn cents. Looking forward to the next chapter.
borg rabbit chapter 9 . 10/1/2005
Ryoga and Akari, the canon solution. Akane and Ukyo soul searching, a very touching treatment. Shampoo openly admitting her faults. I hope that Ranma discovers Nabiki's pregnancy. It seems that the to and fro between them would encourage some growing up on Ranma's part. If Nabiki is honest and let's Ranma know how she feels about sharing his love and impresses him with her the other's decision to offer him freedom to choose or refuse, maybe he could make a choice based on his own internal honor, not imposed honor.


Majin83 chapter 9 . 10/1/2005
*clap* *clap* *clap*

This was amazing...Akane is off to a rehabilitation centre, Nabiki, Shampoo/xianpu and Ukyou are all sitting round a table being civil...Ryoga being told to look after what happiness he has...

I am really looking forwards to the continuation of this fact, i can't make up my mind which one i want next..they're all good!
Sterling-Ag chapter 9 . 9/30/2005
Good so far. It's getting harder and harder to find a good Ranma fanfic to read these days. I appreciate your efforts.I look forward to your next update.
Upgrade chapter 9 . 9/30/2005
Ahh, this story is good.

Hmm, if Ranma marries all three, how would they explain it when Ukyo gets pregnant? Since she's supposed to be a guy on the wedding certificate in that situation and all.

That could be really interesting with the doctors during those nine months. Pose as lesbians or something?

Aah, you may not write that far, just sharing my thoughts.

Keep this coming.
Sterling-Ag chapter 3 . 9/30/2005
Still going the way I like idea #3
Tuan Anduril chapter 9 . 9/30/2005
Amazing. simply amazing. will wait for update dutifully
Sterling-Ag chapter 2 . 9/30/2005
The story has been a fun read so far but I need to tell you A/N's in the middle of a story like these...

(AN: this is taken from what I have read of Ranma/Sailor Moon crossovers),

(AN: This is taken from a Ranma/Tenchi crossover where Washu wanted to run some tests on Ranma. The story was very good.)

This is not good. They really interrupt the story and totally ruin the reader's immersion into the story. If you need to make comments like these save them to the end. Other then that concern, this has been pretty good so far :)
James Axelrad chapter 9 . 9/30/2005

...neat twist. definitly worht the at for this chapter.
Delta-Theta chapter 9 . 9/30/2005
JohnnyG chapter 9 . 9/30/2005
Excellent story so far. Keep up the great work.


Trugeta chapter 9 . 9/30/2005
Very good introspection on the girls' part. It's nice to see them finally catching on to the fact that they know next to nothing about what Ranma wants. The situation finally seems to improve for him.

And do I see a chance for Akane and Ryoga, once they've come to terms with the p-chan thing? Good work, till next.
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