Reviews for Time Enough
xxnarufanxx chapter 21 . 4/5/2010
wonderfull story!

i really enjoyed reading it
Little Black Bird chapter 9 . 3/31/2010
I read up to this chapter (chapter 9). It is not the type of story that I normally read, but the setup was intriguing. It was this chapter however, that broke it for me.

I have little sympathy for Ginny. Not because she became engaged to Dean. I see no problem with that. She and Harry were never married, there is no expectation that she wait for him, indeed, if Harry loved her, he would not want her to.

As I said this is the chapter that broke it for me, and I cannot continue to read. This, because all of the unbelievable characterizations presented.

Let me start with Remus Lupin. Overall there is not much problem with his character except for one blinding problem. Apparrently he got in an argument with Ginny when she became engaged to Dean. What makes it his business ! How can anyone short of a judgmental, controlling busybody tell an acquataince, not even family, that they can't love anyone else but must wait for someone in an indefinte coma?

Now Ron and Hermione: I'll leave aside that they let the situation continue so long. When Harry finds out about the situation and leaves for Grimmald place, they both come and try to explain that Ginny really does love Harry. How can they know that? What has Ginny done to show that her love for HHarry is honest? Besides that, what does it matter if Ginny loves Harry? She has shown that she treats the men loves loves caullosuly. Even if she did love Harry why would either one of his firends want Harry to put up with that.

Now let us look at thanother point. The fact noby cared to tell Harry what was going. Sure, at the begining it was proper that Ginny tell Harry what was going on. It was her engagement after all. But latter as kept it a secret, and continued to string both Harry and Dean along, she lost right to demand that everyone else keep her secret. The engagement was a matter of public record. It was not a secret. Everyone of Harry's firends who saw Ginny stringing hhim along had the responsibility to clue him in.

The last thing I will bring up, is the matter of Dean. In the chapters I have read, I have seen no problems with his relationshipo with Ginny. He seemed like a nice guy, who shared a mutual love with Ginny and treated her correctly. Yet, the weasleys seemed to treat him inappropraitely vindictive whenthey tossed him out of the burrow. I understand the need to diffuse the situation, but he was victim, and needed to be shown some compassion. That goes for Harry as well, I know that he was caught up in the moment, but I would hope that upon relfection he would recognize that Dean has been maltreated as well, unfortunately he still seems to harbor him ill will.
ghostwarning chapter 5 . 9/2/2009
...Okay...Nao I yell at Ginny.

YOU'RE TERRIBLE!

*squeak*

TELL HIM!

I-I can't...

YES YOU CAN! CHOOSE! DEAN OR HARRY?

I...Don't know...

CHOOSE RIGHT NOW

Harry...

Good. Now go murder Dean for me. :)
ghostwarning chapter 3 . 9/2/2009
Can you please...

Kill Dean?

Never mind.

I'll do it -_-

DEAN!

What?

Come here.

*walks over to Mindy* Well?

*grabs wand* REDUCTO! *blows Dean's head to smitherenes*

D
Shadows-of-Realm chapter 21 . 8/15/2009
This was an amazing story! I have to say, I'm horribly surprised that Dean would do such things. I love the story! Maybe a sequel at some point?
Ginnylove9990 chapter 21 . 6/27/2009
Awesome story. I loved every word of the story.
Ginnylove9990 chapter 3 . 6/27/2009
Did not want to quite read but I had to tell you Damn Good Story.
wizmage chapter 18 . 6/9/2009
Great story, i really should have added this to my favorites a long time ago.
tobystephensfan chapter 21 . 12/28/2008
I absoloutley LOVED this story! I've spent a day and a half reading it and i find it so lovely, emotional and just breathtaking. I am sad to have only just discovered it when i could have read it ages ago. I really hope you write another story like this very soon. I am saving this story to my computer it is just fantastic! Thank you so much for writing it. I am a writer myself and understand just how time consuming it is. So thank you!

Hannah
face towards the dawn chapter 17 . 12/7/2008
whoa . . . long chapter.
deansgirl33 chapter 21 . 8/31/2008
amazing story

I read the whole thing in 1 day

good work
toffeecakesxox chapter 3 . 8/17/2008
Oh, a love triangle! I love it! :D Great chapter!

Strawberry xx
toffeecakesxox chapter 2 . 8/17/2008
Awesome chapter! It was so emotional, and I was not surprised to find tears in my eyes.

Strawberry xx
toffeecakesxox chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
Wow, this is an amazing beginning. The suspense - everything! :D

I love it! ]

Strawberry xx
riegert8 chapter 21 . 5/11/2008
I admit that I love this story and Hate at the same time, I admit that I did realize that this story was complete. For me the last chapter I seen was chapter 19 Comeuppance and that was a long time ago, I was rereading old story's and seen that there new chapter since the last time I read it. At the time I read the story I did not like to review story's, but now I like to review good story's. I felt that Ginny was lucky in this story's, for the reason that she got a second chance with Harry. I could understand Ginny reason's and how some things were out of her control, what worse is what Dean did behind her back to try to get her for him self. Even if it was not all Ginny's fault she did cause Harry so much pain and sometimes it hard to overcome, It nice that Harry & Ginny end up together.
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