Reviews for Stewie's Mission
Seto's Other Sister chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
that was a good story, don't listen to that Eric guy, he's just a poopface. Just try to work on your grammaer and spelling a little, but don't worry your story isn't bad. Don't listen to flames. Keep it up! :-)
DryBonesxValley chapter 1 . 3/19/2005
Cool! I love Family Guy fics, you know, they're just so-

B-B-BEEP

"Please insert 25 cents."

" you you son of a !"
SpiderSquirrel chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
You need to double space and learn how to use spell/grammer check.

other than that, it was funny
Stryke Manson chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
I like the stroyline very much, but there were some punctuation errors and things that kind of annoyed me. Still, it's really cool, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
tvgirlrulz chapter 1 . 12/4/2004
i can write better than you! i'm only in kindergarten...read my story-back in time with spongebob- its better!
rain21-06 chapter 1 . 11/29/2004
first off, this good for your first fic, your learning and getting into the way of things. but honestly eric3d, your an ass! this is called fan , that means people are allowed to mold stories into their own. it looks like people like this fic too, so don't be so anal man, honestly. mystical, your story is good, and personally i think you should keep writin. i had hard crit. too on my first fic, but just take it as the person is helpin you out(even in this case(lol))so keep writin

-slim:)
Dancer in a Daydream chapter 1 . 11/10/2004
Hey I like it! Dont listen to that guy. Please continue! :):):)

Thanx for the reveiw on my story!
Eric3D2B chapter 1 . 11/8/2004
I only have one word for this... LAME! First off You overplayed peter's supidity and you didn't put in any of meg's premadonaism Stewie wouldn't kill bin laden but make sure he joined in his faction along with his unborn brother