Reviews for Broken
Neko chapter 2 . 12/4/2008
I love the couple!

Nice story btw...

oddly enough it reminds me of Jail Academy Anarchism (doujin) o.O
SWEET-STUFF063 chapter 2 . 6/14/2007
are they gay?
Sumarra chapter 2 . 6/26/2006
Oh wow that was amazing :D you should write another chapter :D
Kumiku-chan chapter 2 . 11/23/2005
Er...I didn't expect it to be so...erm...graphic...my bad./ crap, now i'm blushing..I'm happy about the way everything turned out though. *waves YzakxDearka banner* Awesome.
xo'.'MaRsHmAlLoW'.'MeL'.'xo chapter 2 . 10/5/2005
I don't think you'll get your account removed! :( Peoplew write worse fics than you on this site...Not mentioning...I mean worse as in lemony, not bad writing, u know wut i mean. Anyway, YZAK LIVES!...oh, and also, YZAK SLEEPS WITH DEARKA, lol. It's Not only does he live but sleeps with dearka right after. _ Anyway, i gotta say, not many YzakDearka lovers like the DearkaMiriallia pairing, but if you do, maybe you could write a story on them cause I like your ideas and way of writing! You probli don't likem though...:( Oh well! CHOW!

Melanie
xo'.'MaRsHmAlLoW'.'MeL'.'xo chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
:( WHAT HAVE YOU DONE! YOU HORRIBLE, HORRIBLE WRITER YOU! ;_; : GR! IF HE DOESN"T FIND A WAY TO LIVE...YOUR NEXT, GOT IT! LISTEN HERE..."SAPPHIRE ARTEMIS", I'm sorry...lol, kdz, _, but why Yzak? I love Dearka and Yzak, they RULE! Soz, HE BETTER LIVE! GR! :( As far as it geos right now, Yzak's dead...And I don't like it ( *_* ) HOW CAN YOU BE SO MEAN! Anyway, If you really like Yzak, he's gonna live anyway, and why would you write a story about him if you don't like him so i now know you do like him so he'll never die! *takes deep exhale* Okay, so were good, cool! _...We better be...

Melanie
AsuransGirl chapter 2 . 8/22/2005
OMG! ur story is so good! do you think you can send me that portion that you took out i want to know what happens!
Tyson chapter 2 . 8/16/2005
Plez send me the rest of the story... its great!
aLie chapter 2 . 8/16/2005
finally. after all those dreadful months of waiting. P

perfect. none the less facinating and wonderful. please send the rest to me..*starry eyes*

i have a feeling i might print it. share it to my friends...that would absolutely please you. ahehe.
artemis347 chapter 2 . 7/13/2005
kawaii! i loved this fic! i read it on aff as well! great job! keep on writing! and shouldn't kreuze get punished or something?
jrod chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
can u send the rest of the story to me please.
sapphireartemisearthlink.net chapter 2 . 7/3/2005
this is a lovely story! and i will be happy if you sent me the rest! thanks with much love!
Jeslyn chapter 2 . 6/23/2005
Nice!

Love it!

Plz send the rest to me! PLZ!
Kayaz chapter 2 . 6/6/2005
That was interesting. I liked it a lot.
wingweaver22 chapter 2 . 5/25/2005
please send the rest to me...

~aznlite
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