|Reviews for A Goofy Love Story|
| mymy chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
i hate to say it but it really didnt hook me... it is a good idea though. I would of loved to see more of goofy after all he should be the main character in the story or else it doesnt really make sense. So in the future try to include goofy a lot more since he is a known character although the girl is not it is a character u created.
| Kartoonfanatic chapter 8 . 12/29/2010
Great work for as far as this story was completed. The plot is both down-to-earth and very believeable in real life and even for a Disney story at some parts.
I love the everyday college-girl idea of Carla and that her thoughts and feelings are thoroughly examined. Although I feared that the story wound become dominant on her side rather than a split down the middle for Goofy's drama, since in most cases original characters tend to either be at the side of the hero as a regular lovestruck cheerleader or taken for granted with their long backstories as if the story was more about them then anything, but there was a good balance of importance between Carla and Goofy, and however action-less the plot was considering the usuall characterisics of cartoons, the light-hearted romantic drama picks up into a nice story. I could see this take palce well before Max's birth, while the Mickey Mouse gang are still getting in a few youthful joyrides of life.
Basically, it's simple, but very well written.
| ScarletReid chapter 8 . 12/24/2010
Add more please!
| Fizzy Starburst chapter 7 . 3/25/2010
Just like Max and Roxanne :D
Good job! *Thumbs up*
| teacupz chapter 8 . 12/12/2009
this was probably one of the most amazing fictions I have ever read. the exploration of characters was well and I liked that you explained from both Goofy and Carla's sides which made both of their feelings and depressions described pretty good in interesting ways. :)
and I think Goofy and friends are in characters. while the other characters that haven't been mentioned in the movie sure had strong and unique personalities. this is the best characterization I have ever found. great job!
the conflicts themselves are pretty enjoyable. they flow and blend perfectly with the story. the ending of chapter 8 sure did bring lots of curiousity... what will happen next? argh, I wanna know! XD
last words, pretty amazing thing that you wrote. put it in my fave, :D I guess you explored the romance greatly although mabye angst will be suiter for the genre instead humor. well, it is only my opinion, anyway...
continue, please. have a nice day and happy updating!
| ashleyjordan chapter 8 . 6/3/2008
I haven't really been able to read this, I was just skimming through. I have been trying to find A Goofy Movie fanfics but this is the only one I've found. It seems really good, in character, good descriptions and completed sentences. I was/am a bit worried though...is this about Max and how he came about? If so, in my opinion, I'd like Goofy and your Carla lady to be married. I mean, I hope that's what it is...otherwise Max appears to be an accident child(a mistake, meaning he wasn't supposed to be born) which I fully do not think is the case. I am going to read your whole story later. I just wasn't able to and I was also worrying about a random fling for the night with Goofy and Carla. I hope that's not the case, if it is, I'll live and get over it, lol. Anyways, I look forward to this story and I really hope you continue/complete it!
| xfilesoc chapter 8 . 10/28/2007
like it a lot more pleases this good veiw on goofy's wife and mother
| Allison chapter 8 . 7/19/2006
This really is an excellent story. The characters are excellently-described, even the original characters. Carla has believable flaws and traits, as does Martha. I truly enjoyed reading your story, and I hope you will continue it soon. I can't wait to see what happens. Keep up the awesome work!
| Demx101 chapter 8 . 7/2/2006
Oh my Gosh...I have read this story at least 15 times, suggested it to some of my friends...and yet I have failed to leave a review sharing how I feel about this wonderful story.
Ok On to my Review.
Ok Each chapter seems to introduce the characters that all of the fans of Disney have come to love and you bring in original characters and some how you find a way to make them seem as if they are real, they have human emotions, and have human needs and desires. The relationship between Mickey, Donald and Goofy is so well written Walt Disney himself would be proud...Personally this relationship, the very some one that is found in your story, is what made Mickey, Donald and Goofy's freindship impact the way realism is use in cartoons today.
Now on to the story its self.
The story bring the reader into the world that you have created. Readers will follow the story word for word to learn what will happen next. When I had finished a chapter I would get so mad at the computer because its slower than the lines at Disney world(actually I just got back from Disney world and the lines weren't to bad:)..I was Screaming at the computer. "What HAPPENS NEXT? STUPIED COMPUTER!WORK!GAHAHHA!."... Now I have broadband and I don't have that problem anymore...Anyway...
As A Goofy and Max fan I have enjoyed reading your story. You stuck well to the characters behavious. The story is amaizing. And it is well written. I look forword to the following chapters.
| Elera chapter 8 . 6/7/2006
This is just classic. I love this story! The canon characters are wonderfully in character, and I think that you've even fleshed them out further. They seem to carry another sort of dimension that the cartoons never depict, and I love what you've done with them.
I usually avoid stories with original characters, because authors usually have a tendency to make them into Mary-Sues, but I think that you've done a wonderful job of making Carla non-Mary-Sue-ish. What I like the most about her is she has that same presence all good Disney characters have - qualities that are easily recognized and related to by the audience. Her numerous insecurities and colorless appearance (only calling it "colorless" because she doesn't doll herself up; she's a beautiful person but she just doesn't know it, hee hee) make her such an empathetic character. Another thing I really love about this story is it breaks the trend that everyone's been following lately, that everyone has to be paired up with their polar opposite. I think it's great that Goofy has fallen for someone who he can easily relate to.
I also enjoy the fact that you aren't holding back on words like 'damn' and 'ass' and other such non-G rated themes, because it does give the story an entertaining and human side that has to be omitted from the appearances of Mickey, Donald, and Goofy. And speaking of the trio, I think my favorite parts are your interaction between the three, as well as Mickey and Donald's stories and references to their relatives, love lifes, careers, and characters such as the Beagle Boys. It's just magnificent to read a story by someone who actually has extensive knowledge about this franchise (and THANK YOU for not making Mickey a complete straight-man; you've kept some of his mischief and cunning that was slain in the 30's and is only slowly coming back in the present day).
Anyway, I could go on and on about this fic, obviously, but I won't bother you with it, hee. Instead, I'm going to add this to my Favorites and wish you luck on writing your next chapter! Great story, I'm loving it, and I can't wait for the next installment!
| Angelgirl963 chapter 7 . 4/15/2006
Geez.. sorry 4 my lasat review 4 the next chappie, but i think it was really late and anyone does not care plz raise their uhh, type raises hand. well it is do you expect my mouth starts bleeding when I eat on my left side
well, its been, say, seven months
I know, you are being eatan by the apocalypse, right, you are soo funny and scare me. I mean who namers thier kid Hedlund? No ofence. (turns up COUNTRY music too scare my milions of stalkers who wanna know how I'm an angel. Those i,do,its ,which is really spelled I - D - I - O - T - S. uh. Stu - pid ugly brother telling people. Sorry, off track. Where's the track? gets turned around by WingsofMorpisios,not spelled right.)And I only hate rap music.)Plz update now? I have a bunch of cute PLZ picture. (arms crossed) HIHI , UH , MEAN BYE
| Angelgirl963 chapter 8 . 4/9/2006
it is good
| An Atheist Avenging Her Rights chapter 8 . 2/23/2006
I really, really love it so far! Goofy is a sweetie, and he deserves to have love in his life. The way he and Carla asked each other out was just adorable! I also love how Mickey and Donald are there and giving support, as true friends do. (I'm writing something like that in the Titanic category). Anyway, update soon, and I'd like it if you were to show a bit more of Donald's good side, as he is one of my favorite characters, as well.
| goofy's-soulmate chapter 4 . 1/20/2006
I just love the fact that Mickey and Donald are in the story (well, not so much of Donald, but hey, he's ok.). The old Mickey, Donald, and Goofy cartoons have always been my absolute favorite. Glad to see the gang back together!
| goofy's-soulmate chapter 3 . 1/20/2006
I am so impressed! Consider me to be one of your fans form now on! I think this story would be a nice alternative as a sequel to the Goofy Movie, despite it's more serious (realistic) tone. "Gawrsh, it's sure swell!" (: