Reviews for Ino's Miso Soup
NilithDelirium chapter 1 . 7/28/2017
I'm here again, just some minutes after, because I unintendedly ended up in another one of your amazing stories. The thing is, when you write I can feel everything the characters are thinking. In this fic, for example, it hurt my chest when Shika reasoned how he shouldn't mourn over the past, but he still watched Ino going too far for him to reach, knowing that it's his fault.

It was great when a five year old Shikamaru was pondering about the fate his folks were talking about, but it was so cute when I imagined Ino stubbornly coming to his classroom to take care of him.

Thank you, really,

ReindeersAreBetterThanYou chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
missehri chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
This story was absolutely superbly written. I'm not much of a fan of first point-of-view, but I love this story too much. I bow down to you. Usually it's the M stories that has me reeling, but ugh... I love this piece. I applaud you!
DAngel7 chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
Ah... this was lighter after reading first "Letting go". I wish to read more ShikaIno from you .. and I wonder will there be one with them ending up together.
bubbles05 chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
I feel a bit bad at Shika, though you can't blame Ino. I would do the same thing if someone said something mean about my cooking, I wouldn't give them any of my cooking.

I'm happy he admits he regrets what he did to her when they were children.

And Miso soup is amazing *drools*
Shadow of Secrets chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
nice story.. poor shika
MariaSabaku chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
I loved it!

It was so cute, yet sad at the same time. I couldn't help but feel sorry for Ino.

But great fic!
fanofthisfiction chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
This is a very cute tale with a twist. I liked the sophistication Shikamaru has as a 5 year old and the realization of a mistake of epic proportions as he looks back on the fateful day he threw away Ino's miso soup.
naash chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
wow that was both sad and beautiful poor shika he should ask her to make another miso soup and drink it all
the sky's bouquet chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
I felt a little heart-wrenching there... I think it was the word choice and flow that got me all sad. :)

This was a good, short read.
Cheerful Regression chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
That was sad! I was only kinda expecting the sad at the wording of the summary, but the title tripped me up.

Arghhh, sad...


loussi chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
I feel like crying for Shika for a genius he can be slow sometimes.
Sabry chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
That was really sad, but good. :)
The Dragon Guardian of the Sea chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
Normally I don't read first character points of view because they irritated me. For some reason I really wanted to read this. And I cried. So good job! I know that sounds silly but I mean it!
ArAshiMitArAshi chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
i love this very much! angsty and sad and...i can imagine it happen
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