Reviews for Paradigm Shift
xikum chapter 8 . 11/27/2004
Hehe! Severus is coming to know the more Slytherin Harry, recognizing the same things in him that he has to address with his 'little snakes'. And the twins and Hermione have caused both greif and support. I love it!
Shea Loner chapter 7 . 11/27/2004
*blinks* Wow. This is really really good. Bravo!

*grins*

ja
Abluebird chapter 7 . 11/27/2004
The writing is a bit forced, to tell you the truth. Try and get a bit more natural flow in. Try putting on mood music or something. I can't really complain because I often get the same type of forced writing. Or maybe it's just a writing style, hm... That's certainly something to ponder on. Maybe it's a form of writer's block. Well, I'll be looking foreward to you next chapter. You're getting to be a better and better witer as the chapters go on. I also like you non-superhero and non-submissive Harry. It's a good look for him. Well, good look with the next chapter!

Tootles

Amitra Minh Day
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