OMG OMG OMG I LOVE THIS *_* i've read it like 3 times *_* they are so pretty and kankuro is, well you gotta face it, a romantic :O (even though he's never had a girlfriend before?)

love how you portraited gaara in chapter 4, lawl. he's such a dramaqueen, really. well well, imma continue reading now *_*

That was so good! You've totally convinced me that Kank/Ten can be a cute pairing. Well done.

-Key

Great story, really well written. Tenten had never before made much of an impression on me, and Kankuro originally creeped me out, but I've come to like them both quite a bit. Thanks for the great story!

Brilliant. Loved it. I'm a Kankuro fan too - yes, there are more of us! - and I'm also getting fed up with the Naruto fandom, but at least it spawns stories like this. Also, THANK YOU for making the Sand Siblings stay in character. I've seen so many Sand Sibling character rapes, and it's so irritating.

Oh, that was just marvelous! I've been looking for a good Tenten/Kankurou fic for a really, really long time. You don't know how hard it is to find good crack pairings. You've certainly done the pairing justice. It came out absolutely marvelous. Excellent. (I did spot a few grammatical errors as I went by, but I was so engrossed in the story, I didn't bother to keep track of where they were, so I could inform you later. Other than that, the fic was magnificently orchestrated!)

Fantastic!

~Jenni~

i love it!*squeals* even tho i'm mostly a nejiten fan..well anyways i really really love it!:D

Well, I started reading this story because I was looking for some ideas on how to write Kankuro. Eventually I figured it out enough to get through his little scene and feel like I had a handle on his character, but I kept coming back to this story to read more.

I realize you wrote this a long time ago, but I want you to know that I enjoyed it immensely. It had just the right touch of action and comedy to keep me entertained and you took your sweet time slowly developing the relationship in a believable way. Grammar and spelling were both top notch and the characterization of everyone was pretty close, if not spot on (especially given what was known when you were writing this), which makes the feat of bringing together two characters that have absolutely no interaction in canon all the more impressive.

Even the last chapter, which you claimed not to like, was handled very well and the ending seemed perfect.

This was a fantastic story and I congratulate you on it.

yay

I LOVE KANKURO!

that was really, really good. thanks

Wow I never thought i'd ever encounter this pairing before. It has to definetly be one of the more unique pairings on fanfiction. Anyway thanks for writing a great story.

-Kat

OH MY GOD THAT WAS SO CLEVER!

You are a great writer, especially the fight scenes, which describe what's going on in a way that is factual yet engaging. You've breathed life into two characters in the most natural, obvious, challenging way: their battles with each other. My opinion of Kankuro is no longer "That fat ugly Sand guy? Erk."

I feel compelled to say it again: your fight scenes are awesome! Spectacular and vivid and awesome! (running out of adjectives!) And e!, romance! Finally (finally!), but not too fast and not too slow.

Stopping. Really. -953

That was one SWEET story!

Gah! I love you, seriously. Thank you so much for writing a Kankuro fic. My friend thought that I was nutters for saying that he was cute, but I was only stating a fact. And using Tenten as his leading lady is equally as awesome because it seems like not only have the fans forgotten about her, but Kishimoto seems to as well. So, kudos for keeping her alive in fandom (without having to pair her with Neji).

As for your action scenes, I found them engaging. I could picture everything that was written, and I could only image how hard it was to think up all of that. I thought the whole burning Karasu up bit was genius. I would have never thought of that.

Anyway I really enjoyed this. And when I get around to finishing the fanart I promised another author, I'll maybe attempt to do one for this fic.

That was such a refreshing read. I mean, at first I was a little bit dubious- Not 'cuz of the pairing (I like crack) but I was thinking, "Oh, I hope it's not going to go all pretentious fight-scene and include ninja politics and stuff". I'm very glad that you didn't. This is one of the few fics that I've actually enjoyed reading the fights. The description and detail are fantastic (and good on you for not rambling on and managing to finish by 8 chapters!) I do think that you could have sectioned out your paragraphs more (I kept getting lost and reading the same lines at points) and a couple of times I did wonder if the fic was going in circles (You know, fight, Tenten hopsitalised, lather rinse, repeat) but it was really engaging and enjoyable. Keep up the good work in future stories!

~Amulet