keep on going! this is a odd pairing, but i would love to read about it!

Look! A review! ;

I love Kankuro and Tenten... not necessarily together, but they're two of my favourite characters. You must write more!

Heh, well I have exceeded your review expectations, so be overjoyed (be even more so to be getting one from someone as clever as I). I'm always up to reading about the lesser known characters and anyone who uses puppets as weapons is cool in my book. Tenten's defeat at Kankuro's hands made sense and was explained in text, as her problems have always been too narrow a focus (that's why she lost to begin with). Your characterization is also within the bounds of what we've seen in the manga/anime (though neither of these two is very developed in canon they aren't card board cut outs either)

Now on to grammar. You want to use the word relying in the second paragraph, not replying.

At the end, Kankuro should be saying when she's conscious not when she's conscience. Otherwise, this was fun to read and I hope to see more.

hey, I'm a fan of Kankuro too... he's cool. So if you'd write a romance fic between him and Sakura, I'd read it. I'd even review every chapter. So, wanna give it shot? Please?

Everyone wants to read romance stories with Kankuro! He doesn't get nearly enough lovins! And for once he's not paired with Shino...or his brother. Hooray!

I loved this story tons. I (almost) completely ignored IMs and what not while reading it.

Give me MORE, damn it! This is all a tease, saying there will be Kankuro romance and then alls he does is take a little pity on someone. I liked the fight scene, though. You really captured the essence of a fight in the actual anime.

I want the next chapter. ;_;

I loved it ! Maybe it's because I'm a Kankuro fan...Anyway, please write another chapter ! It could be a very interesting story...Ne ?

LOL! Great job on this chapter! UPDATE!

That was really good! I'm surprising myself that I'm reading this pairing, 'cause I'm a NejiTen fan. Oh well, I still like the story, and I think I'm going to like this pairing!

I don't like Kankuro, but I must admit you've portrayed him as a very, very capable ninja. Tenten has followed quite the opposite path, she seems barely more than a spoiled brat.