Reviews for Don't stand so close to me
FascinatingSnape chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
I love this song! Great take on the MLC!
dizzynetbookgirl chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
It was awfully short...
Madame Oubliette chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
Ha ha freaking hilarious - particularly liked the cough

/ Nabokov couplet.
ESP chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
Uhm, were all of those exclamation marks really necessary? They detract from the story. Not that there was much story to speak of. Squinting past the cloggy grammar and spelling, there didn't seem to be very much there, just a song and a reiteration of the Marriage Law Challenge.

"there were also bad guys after her"

that is simply the most vivid, lovely, enigmatic description of Death Eaters I have ever heard. Simply inspired.

But then again, 'no one else matter!'

Heather chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
Hi! Awesome idea... perhaps you could expand it to a full story? It would be a fresh view on the MLC, that I certainly haven't seen yet!
Black-Rose23 chapter 1 . 2/1/2005
This is pretty good, but the part where it mentions that she is married confuses me. Who exactly is she married to if not Severus? Because it didn't sound like she was too happy with him when she could be with Sev.
Crazy-Physco chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
that was cool
NetsirkElocin chapter 1 . 11/11/2004
Wicked. Very short though. I liked it.
Talon McGreggor chapter 1 . 11/10/2004
I read this fic and read it to my friend who I'm on the phone with. :-) We like the new meaning to the term "Head Girl" line. :-)

Keep it up!


Elphiey chapter 1 . 11/10/2004
well, that was different. i, well, um, differnt
CapriceAnn Hedican-Kocur chapter 1 . 11/10/2004
oh this was great! I wish there was more story, but the song fits SO perfectly!