Reviews for Keep
Serendipithy chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
Like many other reviewers before me, I'm also tearing up after reading this. The emotions really run deep in this and opens you up to the world (or just to the characters in this story.)

I'm sorry hearing about your sister, too. Even though you don't know me at all, and even though this is probably the first time I have ever reviewed, I just wanted to say that. :) I lost my father eight years back when I was still in elementary school, so I don't understand the extent of your feelings as much as I want to. Sometimes I wonder the would-have, could-have, should-have beens if our loved ones were alive. I'm sure we all daydream about it at one point in time.
jessi chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
Beautiful story! I really enjoyed it!
browneyes730 chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
wow, this was beautiful. thank you for writing this. :)
Lady Of The Sphinx chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
Ok it is offical i cried after reading this story. I loved it( well maybe not cried but i teared up) this is one of the few stoies I've read( and i've read alot) that actually seem somewhat plauseable considering Seto's character. this is very good writing. please keep it up! and please, pretty please update some of your other stories like the rose chronicles, you are killing me here! lol

Sphinx
Aeflid chapter 1 . 8/24/2006
That was really beautiful.
dream-fantasy10 chapter 1 . 10/6/2005
...*speechless*... 0

"That and... he understood her. He understood what she'd been through, and he didn't pester her about any of it. He let her talk when she needed to, and maybe even prodded her to get her to open up when she thought she didn't need to talk, but she really did). He was annoying, egotistical, and stubborn much of the time, but ever since Tokyo Tower, he...

He was just different. Different from all the other guys.

She urged his hands to close tighter around her waist, holding her against him as close as they could both possibly manage. Neither of them said anything, and they stayed like that for the remainder of the ride."

the best part. omg, that was just so VIVID. i could imagine everything and it seemed so...real. major propz. D

awesome job on making the characters not too OOC. that was cool. plus, the way you made them end up together in the end was truly amazing as well: not too fast, not too slow. in other words, perfect. 0

One of the BEST one-shots out there. XD
dream-fantasy10 chapter 1 . 10/6/2005
...*speechless*... 0

"That and... he understood her. He understood what she'd been through, and he didn't pester her about any of it. He let her talk when she needed to, and maybe even prodded her to get her to open up when she thought she didn't need to talk, but she really did). He was annoying, egotistical, and stubborn much of the time, but ever since Tokyo Tower, he...

He was just different. Different from all the other guys.

She urged his hands to close tighter around her waist, holding her against him as close as they could both possibly manage. Neither of them said anything, and they stayed like that for the remainder of the ride."

the best part. omg, that was just so VIVID. i could imagine everything and it seemed so...real. major propz. D

awesome job on making the characters not too OOC. that was cool. plus, the way you made them end up together in the end was truly amazing as well: not too fast, not too slow. in other words, perfect. 0

One of the BEST one-shots out there. XD
Dani chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
i loved it! really inspiring-i've had people in my life who've passed on, and i can relate a bit. i really liked it a lot. Thank you for being sucha terrific writer.
ashley chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
that was an outstanding fic. please write more:)
the red feather chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
*sniff* Made me cry...wah. It was beautiful. It reminds me of my cousin Kacie, who died before she was a year old. *sniff* I loved it. I love SetoAnzu too, so woo hoo. *sniff* wah. Write more like these. Please.
Taikikou chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
WOW I realy Love it it shows the soft side f seto wow again

WOW that all I can say Great Job
frypan chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
Wow. This one-shot fic is truly moving and yet at the same time, it's in touch with the characters in it, unlike other fics. :) I really enjoyed reading it.

I'm very sorry about your late sister, Michelle...
Anna chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
Well, this has to be one of the best Seto/Anzu ffs I've read up till now. Actually one of the best out of the entire YGO-fandom.

You manage to pull it off with an in-character Seto, great ideas concerning Anzu's past as we never get to know THAT much about her, cuteness, mild humor and of course heart wrenching scenes. Great! I really adore you for writing this.

And I'm sorry about your sister.

It sure is not easy to lose someone that close. I lost my boyfriend two years ago which was pretty hard on me and still is. So, I know how you must feel to some extend.

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Cerridwene chapter 1 . 2/2/2005
oh... my... god... that was just so damn beautiful *sobs*
Eve-Of-Misery chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
That was so beautiful and sad. I was so caught up in it.
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