Reviews for Name Calling
Squire chapter 1 . 12/2/2004
I love the way you showed Walt's awkwardness. There's a wealth of angst and opportunities to explore between Walt and Michael and I love what you've shown us here!
Cerrita chapter 1 . 11/12/2004
Wow, that was really good. You captured the dilema in their relationship really well. I'm impressed with the quality of your writing, good job.
nigglesnush chapter 1 . 11/12/2004
That was really sweet - a strong, realistic portrayal of Walt's view on his situation. The shift in the POV from Walt to Michael is a little awkward, though. Other than that, good work. More, please! :)