Reviews for A New World
Rei Subarashii chapter 12 . 11/30/2005
Gah, I just remembered A New World yesterday, and decided to come see if you had any new chapters. _

Excellent.I wasn't dissapointed. You did an excellent job on this story.
Ri2 chapter 12 . 8/21/2005
So they survived, somehow thanks to Ho-Oh.

Well, thank you Mr. Rainbow Bird!

Even if the pairing is a little strange, I still liked this story. Nice job.
Ri2 chapter 10 . 8/20/2005
Shadow HO-OH?

Well, that's unexpected. Damn!
albert de ruiter aka 205780 chapter 7 . 8/17/2005
in the name of all that is dark (and shadow) please make a next chapter or ill launch a nuke on your house ... ow wait sorry i watched the sum of all fears to much

i'm dying without your story

please i'm bi and in love with this fic
Schizy chapter 7 . 7/2/2005
Hi ! I've read 'Prelude to a new world' and 'a new world' over and over again for the past few days and I just can't get enough of it Nascour and Char are a great couple, it's very original I also like the realism in these stories (even though there's also supernatural stuff, but I love it nonetheless ) Please update, I absolutely CAN'T wait to see what happens next - Keep up the wonderful works !
Minty-Fivestar chapter 6 . 2/5/2005
...Ugh... sorry it took me a while to read and review this...

Anyways, another great chapter. I feel for poor Char-he doesn't want to hurt the kids of the Kids Grid, but he also doesn't want to betray Cipher. What a dilemma...

Despite what you say about this not being as good as it was, I think it's coming along fine. You're one of the better authors I've found out there-keep going!

Keep up the great work! Till next time...

-Samantha McPhoenix (aka Pichu*Star)
Rei Subarashii chapter 5 . 12/30/2004
You don't give this chapter enough credit. It's pretty good,seems like theres some inner hostility goingon though. Itdefinetly refects your feelings.
Minty-Fivestar chapter 5 . 12/6/2004
Nice... well, I think the battle could have been extended a little more, but then again, you said this wasn't your best. That's all right. I have my share of chapters I don't particularly like either. The trick is to come back later and edit over it. Always room to improve!

Oh, now I can't wait to see what Gonzap and Evice are up to... I hate those two! And how are they making new Shadow Pokemon without Ein? Questions, questions... Keep it up, ok? See ya later!

-Samantha McPhoenix (aka Pichu*Star)
Minty-Fivestar chapter 4 . 11/19/2004
Another great chapter. This is turning out really good and I like it a lot.

I liked Dakim's characterization in this chapter a lot. Makes me see him in a new light... I can't say I agree with Vander's characterization, though. I don't like how he is a jerk to his Pokemon. But then, that because that's totally opposite of how I perceive him. So don't look too much into it, it's different and really contrasts Cipher a lot. I mean... bad guys who want to take over the world, but love Pokemon; and good guys who want to protect the world, but don't love their Pokemon as much. It's hard to decide who I should be rooting for! _ But I stick with Cipher here because they're so cool.

This is coming along GREAT! Keep up the great work, ok? Until next time...

-Samantha McPhoenix (aka Pichu*Star)

PS: Your story is officially on my favorites! Whee! _
Rei Subarashii chapter 4 . 11/18/2004
I enjoyed this fanfic and think it is very good.

Although I feel that Char should start playing a larger roles in battles.
Shika T chapter 3 . 11/17/2004
Those names are from Telefang.

I'm not much of a yaoi fan, but hey, since it's on *this* site, I can stand it. I, too, think Venus's character was pretty much perfect. I haven't played Colosseum in a while, but I believe that Miror B. needs a bit more disco lingo in his dialogue... something like that. I still liked reading it. Don't be like me and not update for months; keep on writing.
Minty-Fivestar chapter 3 . 11/16/2004
_ I really liked this chapter. It's a really refreshing take on Cipher. They're all one big, happy family... Hehe. I really like that. Cipher and its Admins are some of my favorite Pokemon characters.

Like before, there are just some punctuation errors (you don't need to put commas after quotation marks, only use them in place of periods right before the end of the quotes). But other than that, it's looking good! I haven't really seen a criminal team scheming to conquer the world that loved Pokemon. (Team Aqua and Magma don't really count in my opinion...) Keep it up! See ya later...


PS: ...Can't say I know where the names are from. Sorry. (shrugs)
Minty-Fivestar chapter 2 . 11/13/2004
Another good read. I'm lucky today.

Basically, I have nothing else to say (same as my review in your other story, I guess). I guess the characterization of the Admins threw me off a little... Venus's characterization was excellent, but I'd love to see more dialogue from Ein (my fave Admin!) and Dakim. Miror B. seems slightly off, but maybe it's just cause I envision him saying "dude" and such... (don't ask...)

Aside from fixing punctuation, this is a nice read. I'm enjoying it (which is saying a lot... after all, I'm not really into yaoi pairings!). Keep it up. I'll be keeping an eye on this. Until next time...