|Reviews for Return of DReaper|
| shelly chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
I did watch March of the Meanest Marathon on my T.V. there was some things about the real Jeri I didn't understand later on I found out that she lost her Digimon and her Mother and it made her depressed and the Puppet came possessed by the D Reaper and the Puppet began to pull Jeri from the tamers and was captured by ADR01 Jeri Type Agent it looked like her and had the same voice that the real Jeri did and when the Tamers found out that she was gone the ADR01 Jeri Type Agent came from hiding behind the rock the eyes looked strange she didn't talk to them but se did smile and even when they got on the Ark to go home she still didn't talk to them Takato and his partner had to take her home The Father was mad and took her a way later on she pins down Step Brother and said that Suffering needs to be Eliminated and the aunt told her to get off of him she looked at her and smiled Takato sees a glimpse of Jeri While Takato and Henry was in school Takato tells Henry that he saw Jeri after their last battle with the D Reaper and when he called her parents they told him that she was gone a couple of hours before and that it wasn't possible for her to go Shinjuku that fast and he also knows there was something different about her Jeri has remarks on the chaos of the world before she was gone Renamon wasn't sure if it was Jeri or not during the battle D Reaper grabbed Takato and Guilmon and pulled them inside and before Guilmon lost his mega form they found a park where it had trees they land Takato was wondering why the park wasn't touched the ADR01 Jeri Type Agent appeared and she told them the Organisms can not be processed Takato tells her that he was worried about Jeri and she doesn't care and after talking to Takato for a while she got bigger and grew Purple wings and her voice begin to change she begin to break Takato's heart he walked up to her and she starts changing again she begin to attack them
| Patagatoluver chapter 6 . 11/29/2011
It is such a relief to find digimon fanfics that don't have bashing. I wish Henry had more of a role but I do love Juri's character so I enjoyed this fanfic, I like the thought of her getting another chance as a Tamer. The poor girl.
Really nice story :]
| Sekhmet'sXembodiment223 chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
Wow, your fan digimon are really creative and intelligent!
And it's very emotional and sweet~
It's about time those two got together~~!
| Gwen chapter 6 . 7/6/2007
If u needed some more info, Lopmon's champion is Rabbitmon (Endigomon is the tainted one) and Cherubimon is her mega. Her attacks are Holy Hug and Lightning Spear.
| Gwen chapter 4 . 7/6/2007
its good but btw, if u wntd to get Leomon back, his ultimate is IceLeomon n his mega is SaberLeomon. And btw, Haguramons mega level is Boltmon
| Story Weaver1 chapter 6 . 4/12/2006
Just one little nitpick, matrix digivoltuion is impossible without a Blue Card. Other then that is really good. The way they defeated D-Reaper was cool and I liked the fluff at the end a lot
| Story Weaver1 chapter 5 . 4/10/2006
Now this chapter I liked a lot. Kneazelmon's champion form sounds pretty cool and the differences between Takato and Jeri as hosts. But my favorite part was at the end when Jeri threw away the puppet and changed her outfit. It was like a rebirth of her character, I like that sort of thing a lot.
| Story Weaver1 chapter 4 . 4/10/2006
That was just stupid, and yet it sounds like something he would do. I'd hate to be a nitpicker but the red card didn't allow them to biomerge, it was to protect them when they were inside D-Reaper
| Story Weaver1 chapter 3 . 4/6/2006
poor Fluffmon. The events in the didital world sound pretty bad
| Hyou chapter 4 . 9/26/2005
ouch, interesting plot twist; Takato's the new host and Jeri's changed her mind. I'm making a wild guess that Jeri will be the heroine of this story and save Takato and the World :O
Anyways, another great chapter, though the Jeri acting cold thing was freaking me out a little. And Alice speaks! :O Anyway, HiAndromon coming out and Poseidomon* (note the spell-checking on "Poseido-", eg: asterisk). Anyway, I have always wondered about those two ever coming to be.
So now that Takato's the host, is it possible to have Guilmon evolution line Agents? :P Guess i'll just find out as it's too late for suggestions :D Ja Ne ~Hyou
| Hyou chapter 3 . 9/22/2005
lol, im getting the chance to review more than usual now since my studies and my research on mythology and philosophy are one in the same.
anyway, another good chapter, at the end, Fluffmon reminded me a little of Gatomon in the Movie although Gatomon didn't have Kari suffer survivor's guilt. Jeri didn't pay much sugarcoating-attention to it like Kari; she spaced out.
anyway, the digivolution line is interesting but i dont think Leonemon would be complete w/o the complimentary buckle thingies that Leomon has on his left arm. and, I'm not completely sure about this, isn't Sakuyamon a Shaman type digimon? making it more...native american-ish? Hindu-ish? I dunno, just speculation. well, anyway, good job, keept it up in future fics (as this one has been completed when I started ._.")
| Hyou chapter 2 . 9/21/2005
excellent, my plan to ruin your life with my incredibly late reviews is working perfectly :D
lol, sorry about this REALLY late review. anyway, good chapter, fire botamon eh?...what was a botamon again? :
anyway, Jeri not wanting a new parter is understandable. pain of loss hurts, alot. but, i also get the feeling that, if Jeri had the heart to forgive Beelzebumon for killing off Leomon, I'd feel that she would give digimon another chance at her heart. but that's just me ._.
anyways, another good chapter (trying not to sugarcoat my reviews too much :P)
| Hyou chapter 1 . 8/31/2005
ok, im reviewing because i feel like a hypocrite ._. lol, i mean, you've reviewed all of my chapters for Rebirth, I figured I should do you some reviews as well :P
and, no, this isnt just a pity thing, im reviewing out of actually reading this so expect more. im doing homework right now so...yea, it'll be a while for me to review all chapters, but i'll do it soon.
ok, first chapter is fine. a pretty good introduction to what I would presume is coming up later on. I havn't read a Jurato story in the longest time and i think i can get back into it now. and the digging thing: perfectly in character...well this whole thing is in character, all characters, 'specially Kazu lol, the dork, but thats why i like kazu, he's a dork; he makes me look smart :P
well, keep up the good work, and expect more reviews later. logging off: ~Hyou
| golden-eyedwolf842 chapter 6 . 7/25/2005
Very great chapter and ending to the story! I hope you will make more stories like this one!
| BornfromDarkness chapter 6 . 7/16/2005
the story was great but you have some errors in the story but i admit you have a nice plot in your ending