|Reviews for The Raven Call|
| rosie chapter 3 . 6/1/2005
| deafield chapter 3 . 6/1/2005
hey i will give you cookies... and i am not a grump*pouts*but i am loving your let raven comfort edward...please.i would feel so much better if she did wait until your next chapie.
| rosie chapter 2 . 6/1/2005
oh...my...gosh...that was absolutley AMAZING! u shud make it in2 a film u no! well gd! loving all the characters n lol luving ur lil bit at v end throws odl fruit thing but u shud b very proud of it! nt running away its so gud! well done cnt wait till chapter 3! xx
| ROSIE chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
AMAZING! so cant wait for more! gunna read chapter 2 now ..
| me chapter 2 . 5/29/2005
great start can't wait to see where this story goes hope you don't take forever to update!
| chef13 chapter 2 . 5/27/2005
FINALLY! i thought you died or something!
well anyway, i loved he new chappie. Stacy is very evil. just like a younger sibling. _ i really liked this quote;
"It was strange how light he felt, as if he didn’t eat."
it shows understanding of the film concept. _
wow, i just sounded like super-dork. FASTER THAN A SPEEDING PROTRACTOR! sorry, i'm hyper today. WE!
well, i hope you update soon! C U L8ER ~_
| watergoddesskasey chapter 2 . 5/27/2005
| the great and almighty po chapter 2 . 5/27/2005
hey, i didnt think you were ever going to post again, its good.
old fruit is scary
0,o im scared.
can i throw little purple rats at you?
(to those who watch fruits basket, the purple rat thing made sence, damn rat.)
| Cathedral Of Chaos chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
Great Charater discription for Raven! discribing her sister too really gives you a feeling of what Raven is like, as siblings can be so opposite.
i also loved the discription of the garden, so many fanfics of edward just skip it or only put in a tiny little blerb about it... it ticks me off, sure i know what it looks like but i love to read and get the image in my head from the words. good job.
also in most edward fan fics i see there are always ripping off the movie and stealing lines and things that happen... but your the first on to mention the shaddow at the top of the stiars, it was in the movie too but many do not notice it. and you never see it in fan fics, you putting it in there doesn't make me scream the "rip off" flame at all, infact i REALLY liked it. and i loved how you introduced the two characters so much more origional that the old "going up into the attack seeing the shaddow in the corner" and most of all the over used line for introductions of edward in edward fanfics the famous "don't go" line! i'm glad to see at least one person break the mold.
though i do wonder, when she got to the top of the stairs to help him up and she gasped at noticeing his hands... well don't you think she would have noticed his hair! and what he is wareing! even before she notices his hands... just a thought. hope you clear it up.. add something like, her being only concerned with another persons well being that after she notices the hands she notices everything else too... yeah i really would like to read more of this, it's great so much better than the others i have read, and your way of writing is great as well. lots of discription with out going over board, perfect images, just plain great!
no if you have ever read any of my other reviews i'm VERY harsh when writing them. not to much to point out spelling mistakes, but just plain old out of character stuff and holes in the plot ect ect. but i also give praise where it is much deserved. i'm brutaly honest about reviews. so feel proud, there are not many fan fics out there about edward that i like.
-Cathedral Of Chaos
| All Apologies chapter 1 . 5/1/2005
Cool can't wait for an update
| deafield chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
i have to know .think person think.i am a fan so bear with should know the feeling when you read the first chapter of a story and know the story is going to be you cant read the rest of terrible to have to wait so please update soon or beg your muse to come back.
a now faithful reader,
| the great and almighty po chapter 1 . 3/27/2005
| Harry Hippie chapter 1 . 11/15/2004
Thank God she isn't related to Kim! Anyway, you are doing a wonderful job. The descriptions are incredible. But...Well, it's waay too similar to the movie, like the beginning with Peg, but her name is Raven and it's written. Otherwise, terific!
| chef13 chapter 1 . 11/15/2004
OMG! I LOVE THE START OF THIS STORY! why didn't you write more? you're so mean! ~_
anyways, i like the character you chose. she seems to be kind of a parallel to Kim. interesting. *strokes chin*
well, i must go. great start! can't wait to read the next update! _