|Reviews for Seeking the Truth|
| Chloe chapter 27 . 8/20/2017
This is such a good book! I don't know how you can think of this storyline!
| j3w3lsimone chapter 1 . 8/7/2017
I've read this story many times and it gets better and better each time.
| Dark phoenix chapter 31 . 2/15/2017
Hey i know this long past when you might want any constructive advice, since this is an old story but I just needed to say that Ginny really should be more supportive. She claims constantly that she wants to 'be there' for Harry but then shows again and again that she's very ill equipped. She's surprised that her life will be disrupted by dating someone with Harry's fame. Upset about the commitment that he made with Hermione even though it's clear that she is Harry's only family (although she does seem to make her peace with that). However, the thing that bothers me most is her short temper and inability to allow Harry any weakness. It says early on that she yelled at him to 'get over himself' when he was mourning his dead godfather and it wad this moment that he took interest in her. Um...why is Harry falling in love with a girl that is essentially telling him he's not entitled to feel what he feels for the only parent figure he's ever known? Why is she upset that Harry is feeling insecure about facing Victor Krum and the prospect of reliving the TriwIzard tournament which was one of the most traumatic experiences of his life. She tells him again and again that she hates it when he closes himself off but when he confesses that he's worried about not being able to do magic or lead a normal life she's reallyl just upset that he's still brooding. She doesn't want him to express his emotions, she wants validation of her own. She claims that she wants him to be happy, but does that mean that she needs to bully him into feeling guilty for every negative emotions that he has? I get the feeling you tried hard to build a strong female character that can put a man in his place but real strength comes from taking on others' pain, not pushing it aside because it upsets you.
| Hermione Grande chapter 1 . 1/4/2017
Really good Fanfic. Loved it, I couldn't stop reading! Please keep writing these!
| Amy chapter 33 . 10/25/2016
Are you doing another chapter please say you are.
| sbmcneil chapter 23 . 9/12/2016
I know this is an old story, but I just wanted to comment that I can't see anyone giving someone as immature and unsettled as Hermione a baby. She's changing jobs and apartments, but she's given a baby without much of a fuss. Her stubbornness, martyrdom, and certainty that she's right don't speak much to her ability to be a single parent, especially since it seemed like she made the decision to adopt and got the baby a few weeks later. As an adoptive mother, I can tell you its not that easy. I don't blame Ginny for being uneasy as to Hermione's plans as far as Harry's role in Lily's life.
| natalieeannee chapter 33 . 7/9/2016
My assumptions is that 1) Harry is regaining control over his magic! and that's why it's taking a while for him to wake up/sort everything out 2) Harry can share magical resources with Ginny 3) Jeff is the culprit!
| natalieeannee chapter 27 . 7/8/2016
I love the connection between turning Fred/George into the birds ... and then at this party giving a brochure with the birds!
| SarahOlivier chapter 1 . 6/29/2016
eww Harry and Hermione? gross!
| natalieeannee chapter 1 . 10/12/2015
I liked this unique plot! It's interesting how so many misconceptions were slowly put into the open. It was strange how Ginny and Harry's relationship changed so black and white from first half of fan fiction to second half - but it was all well written and I couldn't stop reading. Thanks for a nice piece of writing
| nanaeleanor chapter 19 . 9/19/2015
This entire plot stands up only because no one ever says to Ron that Harry and Hermione have never been a couple. In this scene why does Charlie or Arthur not say (for the hundredth possible time) to Ron that it's never been true. It drives me crazy. Everyone allows Ron to keep up his grudge. Why? Only for the plot and that doesn't really work. I like the story, but it isn't believable that no one ever tells Ron he is wrong.
| GinnyWeasley chapter 33 . 6/20/2015
You should become an author. This was by far the most beautiful fan fiction I have ever seen!
| Kenzie chapter 33 . 6/2/2015
I have just finished reading this fanfic. I must say, wow. I always thought that the majority of fanfics are cheesy. This story is wonderful: the plot is well-formed, writing flows nicely, and it is just generally VERY good. It actually made me "fangirl squeal" in the same way many books do. Just wanted to let you know that I very much enjoyed your writing and I will be looking around for more!
| Guest chapter 33 . 3/14/2015
Yaaaaay! Harry wins! He gets the girl, the family, the money, the career, the fame! Sometimes life is soooo not fair!
| Guest chapter 32 . 3/14/2015
There better damn we'll be a sequel!