Reviews for Sin
PAULS GAL chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
LUCKY SUZE! WHY CANT I BE HER? NOT FAIR !
bloodycreature-postergirl chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
*tear* sad, but really well writen
Literati Lover chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
Wow...to say you have a way with words would be an understatement! That was amazing and one of the best poems I have ever read! I love it!
Bobwashere chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
Whoah

I really like Paul...Thanks for this!
LolaBeth chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
Darling this poem is really good, please keep writting. I love it!
mellark chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
wow.

That was really good.

Thouroughly enjoyed it.

Good job!
walkingwater chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
WOW Intense stuff. 10 points from me
AngelONight chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
that was amazing

poor suze :(
scarredvines chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
Love the rhyming...and the 'idea' of the poem. I mean, Jesse leaving Suze, and Suze runs to Paul for comfort. Silver
hpdude-4life chapter 1 . 4/17/2007
Oh. My. God.

8O

wow!

i am still momentarily shocked.

8O

WOW!

THAT WAS INCREDIBLE! I MEAN, THE WORDS, RHYMING WIT SUCH MEANING ANG WOWNESS!

im sorry that review may seem ott. but it was THAT gd.

because of it, i think im warming 2 the paul/suze ship...

NO! i luv jesse!

uh, well, u know, u must admit:

if only he were real...

hehe 8P
sadiethesiren chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
wow so i'm going through your stories. OMG. your so talented. wish i could write this well. keep it up and UPDATE FASTER. Your stories are so addicting
Em Fargo chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
WOW! possibly the first poem i've ever liked! except, of course, for all the others i've said i liked i wasn't lying or anything...

but no poem's ever made me feel like this...

it's like... you know?

BLAH!
Beevle chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
That was... intense! Very nicely written, rhymes and everything! Creepy -but fitting- name, too. ;)
joel madden's girl chapter 1 . 2/11/2005
God that rocked! Make a story out of that, totally!
AshDawnSoulmates chapter 1 . 2/3/2005
Goddess...That was really well written...conveyed feelings really well and really easily...didn't seem forced. Wow.
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