|Reviews for Sin|
| PAULS GAL chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
LUCKY SUZE! WHY CANT I BE HER? NOT FAIR !
| bloodycreature-postergirl chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
*tear* sad, but really well writen
| Literati Lover chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
Wow...to say you have a way with words would be an understatement! That was amazing and one of the best poems I have ever read! I love it!
| Bobwashere chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
I really like Paul...Thanks for this!
| LolaBeth chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
Darling this poem is really good, please keep writting. I love it!
| mellark chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
That was really good.
Thouroughly enjoyed it.
| walkingwater chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
WOW Intense stuff. 10 points from me
| AngelONight chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
that was amazing
poor suze :(
| scarredvines chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
Love the rhyming...and the 'idea' of the poem. I mean, Jesse leaving Suze, and Suze runs to Paul for comfort. ~Silver
| hpdude-4life chapter 1 . 4/17/2007
Oh. My. God.
i am still momentarily shocked.
THAT WAS INCREDIBLE! I MEAN, THE WORDS, RHYMING WIT SUCH MEANING ANG WOWNESS!
im sorry that review may seem ott. but it was THAT gd.
because of it, i think im warming 2 the paul/suze ship...
NO! i luv jesse!
uh, well, u know, u must admit:
if only he were real...
| sadiethesiren chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
wow so i'm going through your stories. OMG. your so talented. wish i could write this well. keep it up and UPDATE FASTER. Your stories are so addicting
| Em Fargo chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
WOW! possibly the first poem i've ever liked! except, of course, for all the others i've said i liked i wasn't lying or anything...
but no poem's ever made me feel like this...
it's like... you know?
| Beevle chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
That was... intense! Very nicely written, rhymes and everything! Creepy -but fitting- name, too. ;)
| joel madden's girl chapter 1 . 2/11/2005
God that rocked! Make a story out of that, totally!
| Daddy's HQxx chapter 1 . 2/3/2005
Goddess...That was really well written...conveyed feelings really well and really easily...didn't seem forced. Wow.