|Reviews for Incident of Yellow Sky, Part 2|
| Aurorablue chapter 1 . 11/16/2004
Wow, talk about a whirlwind courtship! I supposed it was in keeping with the situation, etc.
I loved how you had Mushy in the thick of things, having things from his perspective. (Yes, I admit, Mushy is my favorite character.)
And what a cliffhanger!
I am very much looking forward to the next chapter.
| Carla K chapter 1 . 11/15/2004
You sure know how to keep a person at the edge of their seat, Ash! This is an excellent addition to the story. Having the chapter come from Mushy's point of view worked out very well and gives the reader a different look at the main characters. And as always, everyone sounds and acts just as I expect them to. Hope there's more soon - the pace of the story moves along at a good rate and leaves a reader wanting more.