|Reviews for Changing lives|
| be11011 chapter 7 . 6/16/2005
hey i love this story please keep writing it it is so good. please put more wilson in it and please read and review some of my stories thanks.
| KayKayeLLe chapter 7 . 11/17/2004
Just a few grammatical corrections. When someone is on the phone and introducing themselves, they say "It is (name)" not "Here is (name", as in "It is Andrew." And your chapter 10 title...the plural form of the word life is lives, not lifes.
I'm enjoying your story. It was a little hard to get through because of some of the language barriers, but for English not beig your first language you're doing great. I like the story lines and the characters (Wilson is a god ::drools:: ) The only thing I would have changed would have been showing Mary and Wilson in L.A. instead of just focusing solely on Lucy and her trip. But you are doing a great job. Keep up the good work.