Reviews for Metamorphosis
Guest chapter 9 . 11/19/2002
I like. do more. I want to be intellectually stimulated and this david character is quite interesting. and don't mock my sentence structure and grammer. This reviewer is doped up after gum sergury and hasn't slept in 72 hours
Demona169 chapter 8 . 1/22/2002
ARGGGGGHHH! YOu cant stop there! NOOOO!
El Varon chapter 8 . 1/11/2002
Your character is pretty cool. And pretty damn powerful, if I might add. Awesome story.
Andy chapter 7 . 6/4/2001
Hey, Looks like you've properly got the hang of this mate ! :)

Looking forward to the next chapter with outstretched claws.

Andy
mae7 chapter 7 . 5/12/2001
Wooohooo! You continued! I like your character, David, he's not super-brilliant or perfect if you know what I mean, and that's good. (We want REAL characters). Definitely continue.
Arwen chapter 7 . 5/11/2001
Great story! Please update soon, I must know what happens! please?
frank chapter 7 . 5/11/2001
I like the stuff

chapter 1-6 are following a strait line and i've read worse

realy good

I'm looking forward for more stuff
mae7 chapter 6 . 4/18/2001
so where's the next chapter? waiting, waiting, waiting...
Rede chapter 6 . 4/10/2001
Oooh yeah, It's friggin' good!
Gryffyn chapter 6 . 4/10/2001
Wonderful, keep up the great work. Tho' I gotta question for ya. Who financed the shopping spree?
Rede chapter 5 . 3/24/2001
Hmmm...I love it. That's all I can say. It's wonderful.
mae7 chapter 5 . 3/23/2001
this is bloody good! please write more :)
Gryffyn chapter 5 . 3/22/2001
Fabulous! Where's de rest? c'mon, ya can't keep a reader waiting, unless y'all trying to gain a trip to casualty.
El Varon chapter 3 . 3/22/2001
This is pretty good. Though, it is now pretty obvious to me that I don't understand soccer(football) terminology.
Lady McClellan chapter 2 . 2/22/2001
Hey I never read non-character based stuff. This changed my mind. Wow, very good.
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