|Reviews for Goodbye 17|
| CrazedDBZFan chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
This is really good. I know this was done a while back but that doesn't take away from how great it is. I can actually see that being what is going through 18's mind at the moment. What she must have felt knownig that her own brother killed her husband and still went out to destroy everyone else she knew. Whether she was doing it because he killed her husband or the fact that she'd rather him be dead then suffer in the belief that what he was doing was right doesn't take away from the fact that you captured this extremely well.
| no one chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
| Hisoka B chapter 1 . 12/13/2004
Let me just take a second to totally forget the fact that 17 was possessed literally by Hellfighter when he killed Krillin... *minutes pause* Ok. That was a very good poem, if you forget the minor detail I just mentioned above.
| dark-mean-me chapter 1 . 11/24/2004
It was beautiful,
I loved this :)