|Reviews for Slouching Toward Bethlehem|
| Meldelen chapter 5 . 4/14
It was a pleasure to read this action-chapter where Kurtis handles like a total boss. Awesome writing. I'm really enjoying this one. Can't believe I haven't read this before. Thank you! :)
| Meldelen chapter 3 . 4/1
I'm reading this after a friend's advice and I just need to stop there, I'm getting too much emotional. The way you describe the feelings and all the things that are not said...whoa. Amazing.
Thank you so much for this. Will keep reading soon. Awesome work.
PS: Just to make a bit of constructive criticism, I don't really think a man could stand on his feet after bleeding so much. No matter the loss of blood is reduced or if he's not as affected as other people, as the doctor says, and much less with a hole from back to chest. Just breathing with such damage would be an excruciating torture, even the strongest man would be in shock after that.
Anyway, just my humble opinion. Amazing. Wish I had found this before. :)
| Namezee ahmad chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
I've just recently explored ur fanfiction and it is truly awesome..
I am really falling in love with it..
Very great job...you should write something more about it...
It will be great pleasure to read ur stuff..10/10...5 stars8-)
| xXxInsanityIsInfectiousxXx chapter 15 . 9/17/2011
YAy! Theyy finnnaaaally got together! I looove this story. Im seriously dangerously addicted!
| xXxInsanityIsInfectiousxXx chapter 13 . 9/17/2011
Ahh im soo addicted to this story!
| Jessica151294 chapter 27 . 5/16/2011
This is definitely one of the BEST fanfics I've ever read! This could be a wonderful 'official AoD' sequel! I could easily imagine the scenes you were descibing! I adored the way you described Kurtis being dark and mysterious (the fake IDs were a great idea..) and affectionate with Lara at the same time! It's very hard to combine such opposite traits in the same character and you did this successfully..!
'Cradle' and 'When All Light Dies' are incredible, I wish you good luck in finishing both of them! ;)
| isaalacrymosaa chapter 13 . 11/16/2010
oh did you hear lara of his past: O
very good fic I like,I decided to read
because I think my other favorite author mention its history
I like especially the escape from the hospital and train
| AliceLuxTrent chapter 27 . 10/7/2010
Wow very epic and amazing story. Poor Kurtis though [. However I loved it and in my opinion, among the best stories I've ever read. Keep up the exqusite work! D
| HazelW chapter 5 . 8/23/2010
Oh, I love this newer version – you’ve fleshed out it much more than its predecessor. I love Kurtis’ indecision about whether to help the panicked patients or not! I love Kurtis', “who the heck take an elevator in an emergency” line! Classic!
| Hazel chapter 8 . 4/24/2010
I love this revamped chapter! The subtle slashyness rocks and I think Kurtis' anger was nice built up. The comment about Lara joining all his other dead relatives and commerades wasa bit below the belt, but gave Trent the ammunition to get frisky in the lake. The frolic in ze water was woderfully written and it really was a HUGE improvement from the first time you wrote this. Kurtis is much more resistant this time round too which rocks! _
| Mai chapter 27 . 7/11/2008
Omg! I love this story! D I couldn't move away from it and had to read it from start to finnish in one go! Pity I couldn't have discovered it sooner XD *Goes to read the next one*
| guytombrafre chapter 7 . 3/24/2007
your fanfiction is one of the best ive read so far
| sea-ess-eye chapter 27 . 1/29/2007
Hi, I really liked your story. It's awesome - you're a great writer. :)
| bm16 chapter 27 . 8/22/2006
I enjoyed this so much! I love your writing...it grabs the readers attention and pulls them into the story; the cliff-hangers were well done and left me hanging on the edge of my seat. Well done!
| Catlantean chapter 27 . 8/18/2006
Love this story :) You have a beautiful writing style, and I see you've done a lot of research as well. The background info on Cappadocia and the use of a few Turkish phrases (not that I speak the language, but still :)) makes the story feel more authentic. As for the swearing, perhaps Lara didn't swear in any of the games (they're all 12 rated, so how could she? :)), but I think it fits the situations and that replacing it with euphemisms would ruin the effect.
Will read the sequel next. Looking forward to seeing more of the Nephilim :)