|Reviews for All in the Timing|
| Hazmatt chapter 4 . 4/1/2009
Wonderful ending! I really enjoyed it! Perfect!
| Hazmatt chapter 3 . 4/1/2009
That's so sad! Great analogy though! I really enjoyed this chapter! I hope they work things out!
| Hazmatt chapter 2 . 4/1/2009
Very sad! I enjoyed it!
| Hazmatt chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
Wow! Intense chapter! Very moving and sad, but kind of dark! I enjoyed it!
| Shimigirl chapter 4 . 1/21/2006
What a great story! sad but great and happy at the end! great job
| Mallorysgirl chapter 4 . 2/3/2005
Great story. I really like how you ended this. Good job:)
| SassySasha19 chapter 4 . 12/13/2004
Wow, that was a great ending I loved it. Yay, Woody and Jordan finally got together. Wonderful story, great job.
| MissDanielle chapter 4 . 12/12/2004
Wonderful...just perfect...Had myself a little cry. You have a talent for diction and write with the most beautiful and flowing style. You write the character's extraordinarily well. Great work!
| LillyLebowski chapter 4 . 12/12/2004
That was great! I love the fact you didn't put in any awkward "I love yous". Great story!
| freelancer-babe chapter 4 . 12/11/2004
| whalersfan chapter 4 . 12/9/2004
like a scene from a movie... stopping, turning, running back... can't help but love it! well done!
| Genisis Stone chapter 3 . 12/7/2004
please update soon:)
| LillyLebowski chapter 3 . 12/1/2004
O...M...G...that was awesome! you must continue! you must!
| SassySasha19 chapter 2 . 11/25/2004
Great chapter, I love how you have both Jordan and Woody's POV's. And I liked Garret's talk w/Jordan, about time someone told her to open her eyes. I feel sorry for her, but at the same time I can understand why Woody's being so distant. please update soon.
| R. Parker chapter 2 . 11/23/2004
that was great
i luved the last 8 lines
i luved the whole in a hushed voice while her back was turned from him thing
it was truly beautiful
u gotta continue
update very soon